A lot of people have mentioned that their query lists are super small because they want to be sure they’re working with someone safe. So let’s do a quick thread on how to still query effectively with a smaller list!
First, you must always remember that querying is a numbers game—all you need is one yes, and you will never be able to guarantee you won’t get form rejections (and many might not have anything to do with something you did)!
So, make sure your query materials are exceptional. Don’t try and invent the wheel—make it short, center the MC in your plot paras, include metadata and bio. Don’t give anyone an excuse to reject out of hand.
If you need direct critique help, there are lots of great resources where industry professionals can crit your query, often for under $50 (and sometimes for free!)
Also, give your plot paras to someone who doesn’t know anything about your book. Have them read it, and then tell you what the book is about. If they’re off, there’s work to be done.
For STRATEGY, don’t just send off queries all at once. Pick a few from your A-list, B-list, and C-list. It’ll take longer, but analyzing when you get rejections will help you correct before you’ve exhausted your whole list.
Next, if you’ve done tons of research, make sure to personalize the query so you look like a hyper-competent member of the biz (but make sure to keep out the “you’re my #1 choice”)
Two final points: 1) make sure (very sure) your manuscript is READY and your craft is strong. With a small list it’s harder to revise and go back on sub
2) lean in to alternative query methods. Participate in #DVpit (but be selective in sending materials), seek introductions to agents from close contacts who might be a little further along than you, and take advantage of publishers’ open sub periods
Oh, and if you get far down the road with an agent (to the call, contract, etc) and it doesn’t feel right, LEAVE. I promise they’re not your only choice.
P.S. if you have your query or first pages or anything else edited, make sure it’s by an expert IN YOUR GENRE AND CATEGORY. Awareness and skill in dealing with tropes is a huge determinant for an effective edit
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I've been at my desk for 22 minutes and I've already received TWO notices of offers from querying writers, so let's talk about it real quick!
It's my favorite thing when a writer tells me they've got an offer from another agent bc it marks a turning point--but I'm not talking about their career. I'm talking about how this is the point where all the agents drop the pretense that the writer isn't the one in power.
It's when agencies are forced to drop their gatekeeper act & actually sell themselves to a writer, and even if I don't end up competing for the book, it's so heartening to see writers setting boundaries and deadlines and being respected by this industry for the first frickin time
1) listing cumulative degrees in the signature instead of having actual real bios on their website OR (1.5) any evidence of previous mentorship or sales
2) gaslighting writers into thinking they aren’t the ones who have the power in an author/agent relationship
It’s in a writer’s best interest to let all other agents know they have an offer on the table—you can compare (potential) agents and better get exactly what will work best for you.
If an agent has requested your partial or full (beyond standard opening submission requirements), 1) if they use email, send them an email in thread but add to subject line OFFER RECEIVED. 2) of using query tracker/manager, push the offer received notification
As promised, here's a thread on word counts! I won't be dipping my toes into the specific conflict that inspired this thread, so think of this instead as more of a Beginner's Guide to Word counts!
Word counts are one of the first things a writer will learn about when they start looking into the publishing side of the business of writing. Not because it's a definitive rule, but because it's easy to list and teach, and it's a pretty basic metric (most) professionals agree on
Here are two things that are both true: 1) a book should be exactly as long as it needs to be for the story 2) genres have standard word count ranges and these ranges are there for a reason!
I'm starting my morning with a gigantic pot of tea and my slush pile, so let's talk about queries for a few minutes!
Every query needs a metadata paragraph, where you tell an agent the data (material information) about your data (the book itself). Most of this metadata is super easy to provide...
Title--I bet your book has one, even if it's a working title!
Word count--just look at the bottom of your word doc!
But then you get to the tougher stuff that, frustratingly, feels like it should be simple: category and genre
I've been talking with authors a lot about how they're frustrated that writing in a panini isn't getting easier. So here is my guide to writing in a global pandemic/when life is hard and uncertain/in late-stage capitalism/in a climate crisis:
Write your 1) most marketable idea 2) as best as you can 3) as fast as you can
If you can't write your most marketable idea, write the idea that you're the most excited about