The #1 Tweak You Can Make Right Now That Will Make Your Copy Go From "Okay" To "Crazy Good".

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Before revealing you this "magic trick", I want you to take a look at these two sentences:

1. If you feel embarrassed because you're fat ... buy this
2. If you currently despise going to the beach and try to invent all kind of crazy excuses not to go because you imagine \CONT
your jacked friends LAUGHING at you and your fat belly... buy this

Which one seems more embarrassed?

If you were a fat man, which one of the two would you buy from?

That's the differnce between Telling (#1) and Showing (#2) -- between "Kinda okay" copy and "Crazy Good" copy.
And here are two ACTIONABLE tips on how you can apply this to your copy RIGHT AWAY.

- Put yourself in your customer shoes.
What would he think in that situation? What would he physically feel? What would he do? What does he see? What are his mind conversations?
A woman who loses a child is not just "sad". Her sleep is erratic and haunted. She just wanted to hold her one more time, but the realization that she can't brings her to her knees, etc.

You have to create a powerful vision.
And that brings me to tips number two:
Particularly, look for the posts where they pour their emotions.
Search for words like:
* terrified
* hate
* love
* ...
If you apply it to your copy and master this skill, you will make TEN TIMES the money you're making now.

If you like this thread and you got useful tips out of it, make sure to RT the first tweet 😎🤵‍♂️♂️🥂

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