You told us that finding the story/narrative that ties your deck/presentation together was a major pain. So let's learn from the experts: Annette @TheStoryFactor shares the 6 kinds of story at the heart of all communication...
Story 1: Who I Am.
What qualities earn you the right to influence this person? Tell them about a time/place/event that provides evidence that you have these qualities. Reveal who you are, as a person. Get personal. People need to know who you are before they can trust you...
How: Ask yourself: Who are you? What makes you special? What earns you the right to influence? Everyone has gifts. What are yours? Are you compassionate, reliable, honest, and diplomatic (not usually the same person)?..