This time of year tends to put me in a retro mood, so I finally played through Dragon Quest I for the first time. Here's a thread on its various official translations and how it's helpful to be familiar with Dragon Quest if you're in the business of translating Japanese media.
The first official English translation of Dragon Quest I was released in the US in 1989 under the title of Dragon Warrior due to copyright issues. It features archaic language, likely in an effort to make it sound similar to games like Ultima or Wizardry that came before it.
The names of people and places are also altered to theoretically sound more like something a native English speaker would have originally written. All in all, the quality of the writing is honestly impressive for a game translation of this era.
The next translation was released in 2000 for the Gameboy Color. This one uses more modern language and is very succinct, which is at least in part because of the tight space restrictions imposed by the tiny screen.
Some name changes get walked back while others are retained. See this interview for more information on why that is: geektogeekmedia.com/geekery/dragon…
It's also worth noting that the Japanese script was updated for the Super Famicom version of the game that never released in the US. All subsequent JP versions (GBC, mobile, etc.) use that script, as far as I can tell. Mostly the dialogue is expanded upon and there are more NPCs.
Finally, the latest translation was released for the Android/iOS version in 2014. This translation is also used for the Nintendo Switch port. It returns to the archaic style with even more flowery language than before, now that there is ample space for it.
I feel like the case of Dragon Quest I is particularly remarkable because its three official translations are all good quality, just centering different approaches and writing styles.
There's no one "right" way to go about translating a game. It's more about the impression you want to make and what audience you're trying to reach (and also restrictions imposed by hardware).
And speaking of reaching audiences, Dragon Quest certainly reached its audience in Japan. So much so that if you're a Japanese media translator, chances are you'll run across a Dragon Quest reference sooner or later.
For example, this line from Story of Seasons: Pioneers of Olive Town might actually be a sneaky DQ reference. I at least recognized it as a generic RPG shop line, which spurred us to make a reference of our own.
The Famicom version of DQ1 itself refers to one of Yuji Horii's previous games, frequently called "Portopia" in English. Portopia, in turn, gave birth to the spoilery Japanese meme 犯人はヤス ("The culprit is Yasu"), which also still gets referenced in games, like say, 7'sCarlet.
Not to mention games like Yakuza: Like a Dragon, which is basically just one big Dragon Quest reference.

(Feel free to sound off with any references you've come across in your work, too!)
Anyway, it never hurts to know your DQ! And to aid in the learning process, I have an excel file on my website with the Japanese scripts of DQ1 and its English translations side by side for easy perusal. lizbushouse.com/resources/

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