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Mar 9 11 tweets 6 min read
Writing a snappy blog intro can be excruciating work.

But it doesn't have to be.

Use this cheat sheet of 7 creative intro templates

(+ live examples from professional content writers:) 🧵
1. Curiosity Gap - Context - What's Next?

Great for: Anything in first person

Author: @kat_boogaard

Open with an intriguing, out-of-context image. Do nothing else. Just pull the pin and toss in the grenade.

THEN do context.

Here, Kat starts with the image of $300k:
2. Relatable detail - State of play - Poke the pain

Great for: Everyday tips and advice

Author: @wordswithalyssa

This one sucks you in with a light, relatable detail, then pulls the wool from under you.

"Hey, [relatable detail]? Well, here's why that's bad."

Sneaky, sneaky.
3. Zing! - Context - State of play

Great for: Voice-driven insights

Author: @ashleyrcummings

Love Ashley's sense of humor, and the literal Leo "Zing!" here is an instant attention grab.

But worth noting: it doesn't dwell.

One sentence later, we're on to the meat.
4. 2nd Person POV - Pain poke - Transition to solution

Great for: Advice, problem-solving

Author: @rochi_zalani

I love the artfulness of Rochi's pain poke.

The "Monday-Friday" thruline is great.

Included a portion of the main body so you can see how it flows:
5. State of play / "But" - Development - Benefits

Great for: "Thesis" posts, persuasion

Author: @sam_milbrath

That first paragraph is so efficient, I included two elements: the basic state of play, along with a counter-point / "but" sentence.

Result:

Instant cut-to-chase.
6. Problem - New Paradigm - Solution

Great for: How-to posts & thought leadership

Authors: @ericasmyname & @tomwhtley

Insights into both problem/solution don't only get your hands around the topic, but also demonstrate how much you know BOTH paradigms.

Establish authority.
7. The Goods - Development - Benefit

Great for: Counterintuitive advice

Author: Your boy @danielkenitz (hey, it's my thread)

No context, no intrigue, no curiosity gap: just state a unique angle and elaborate.

Upside-down pyramid works best when the idea itself is upside-down.
Obviously, this list has a bias towards intros that fit into a tight Twitter window.

AND a bias towards intros that might fit a three-pronged template.

But I find that with enough practice, if I grasp the principles, I learn when to break the rules as well.

So will you.
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99% of people scroll past your tweets.

But not @ItsKieranDrew 's tweets.

He's used startling hooks to gain 1000,000 followers.

Here's how his writing stops you in your tracks:
@ItsKieranDrew ✏️The "First-Act Disturbance" Approach✏️

Kieran has read a lot about storytelling, and it shows.

How do you start a good story?

With a DISTURBANCE.

Here's his most viral Tweet: "You're destroying your body."

He puts us on our heels off the bat, which earns our interest.
@ItsKieranDrew This isn't exclusive to Twitter hooks.

It's been around since Gilgamesh.

Classic storytelling starts with a disturbance off the bat:

📚Frodo inherits the ring
📚Marley's ghost visits Scrooge
📚Odysseus' ship veers off course

All great stories are comeback stories.
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Nov 15, 2022
Early on, if Upwork clients didn't hire me, I didn't make money.

So I got good at sending proposals.

Here are the freelance proposal rules I use to land repeat clients:
🧵
First: why can I tell you about this?

I made my living off of Upwork for many years.

Though I don't use it as much anymore,

it's still the place I go when I need to find people who are hiring.

After about a dozen proposals, I know I'll have legit leads.
✏️1. Address their situation off the bat.

First challenge?

Someone posting on Upwork is FLOODED with proposals like yours.

So skip right to it. Address:

✅The problem that made them hire someone
✅How you would solve that problem

Put your social proof / cred at the BOTTOM.
Read 9 tweets
Nov 14, 2022
Ever notice that writers always seem burned out?

Sadly, it's inevitable.

Writing is craft. Craft is hard to scale.

So I searched for lessons in mass production in history.

Here's how medieval Venice produced one new warship with their hands...

..EVERY. SINGLE. DAY.🧵 Image
Warning: this was originally a blog post. It's a long one.

If you don't have time right now, bookmark it instead.

But if you like...

✅Productivity lessons
✅A few takeaways for outsized production
✅Historical junk 'n' stuff

...it's more relevant than Chrome extension tips.
Before conveyor belts,
before steam power,
before replaceable parts...

…there was the Venetian Arsenal.
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Nov 9, 2022
The worst feeling in email writing:

Being ignored.

The best way to avoid that:

Subject line frameworks that hint at delicious intrigue.

Here are 10 formats I used to help a client get 70% of their emails opened:

🧵 THREAD 🧵
#1: FOMO + [content].

Easiest to incorporate.

Automatic scarcity.

Think:

✉️Last chance for [discount]!
✉️The season's almost over for [promotion]!
✉️[Promotion] ending at midnight: [content]!

The key:

Use sparingly, or you'll spend all of your credibility fast. Image
#2: Short, painful opposite.

Consider your offer.

Re-write it as a "short, painful opposite."

Six words MAX.

The shorter the better.

✉️They're ignoring you. [email tips]
✉️My spouse cried last night. [p. finance]
✉️My neighbor bought my dream car. [stock recommendations] Image
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Every time I want to give up an endeavor, I think about the Borg.

It's silly, but here's the thing.

This framework always works for me.

8 inspirational lessons from Star Trek's greatest villains: Image
Some context for the non-nerds.

The Borg are the key villains in the ST universe.

They first appear when Q flings the Enterprise at the Borg.

His goal? To teach us humility against what lurks out in space.

The lesson works.

In a rarity for TNG, Picard has to beg Q for help. Image
But there's something funny about the Borg as a villain.

They possess no "superpowers."

They don't breathe poison gas,
they don't cast spells,
they don't shoot lasers out of their eyes.

They're simply a humanoid species who have gotten really, really good at what they do.
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5 facts that will make you feel better about where the world is heading:
1. Life expectancy

Since 1900, life expectancy has doubled.

DOUBLED.

"No country in the world has a lower life expectancy than the countries with the highest life expectancy in 1800." Image
2. Abundant calories

There are more per capita available than ever.

Where I live, the struggle is with obesity, not famine. Image
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