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Landing page design advice to convert warm and cold traffic 2-3x better (that has nothing to do with colors):
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High-converting landing pages always have a few things in common... no matter the industry.

We’re going to explore:
• overall design
• emotion
• color
• headlines
• CTA’s
• trust
• images
• scan-ability
• structure

You ready?
Let’s get started…
1. Overall Structure & Design

The best landing pages have:
• specific headline
• intriguing hook
• amazing offer
• tons of social proof
• urgency & scarcity
• a clear CTA
• bonuses
• client/customer wins
• no off-page navigation

And one more big one…
A simple design that flows together without being crowded.

Crowded landing pages:
• don’t highlight important information
• make you read everything on the page
• lose the reader & reduce conversions

Here’s an example of a page that is too crowded and has poor readability: Image
To avoid crowded pages, you want to provide enough space between different sections and elements.

Cutting out any fluff in your wording also allows for better flow and higher conversions.

Here’s a page that breaks up their sections better while also including fewer words: Image
2. Emotion

There are a number of ways to provoke emotion on your landing page:
• color
• pain points
• solutions
• more humans

Everyone and their mother has heard of different colors meaning different things but…
You don’t need to memorize that.

Here’s why…
You should pick colors that match your brand and product.

Most of you don’t have million-dollar companies so why are you thinking like one?

If you want to use red - use it.
Just don’t be silly with crazy colors (use common sense here).

Go to for help.coolors.co
I don’t want to dive too deep into this but…

Your ideal customer’s pain points and solutions to those problems should be all over the page.

Research their problems.
Paint your offer as the solution to them.
(tip below in the picture)

And to make it feel MORE personal… Image
Add some pictures of people smiling.
Try and avoid basic stock photos as well.

People can sniff out the real stuff.
Take the time to take your own pictures or use ones that aren’t so “fake”.

It’ll increase conversions I promise.
Doesn’t this make you feel happy? Image
3. Designing Your Headlines

Everyone always talks about writing great headlines but no one mentions their layout.

Like the first picture I showed you, it’s important that you mix up the font size.

You’ll be able to capture your reader’s attention whenever you want.

So...
I like following the order of:
• small text (10pt font)
• large text (20pt font)
• medium text (14pt font)

Small text - introduction/callout
Large text - main headline + attention-grabbing
Medium text - how they can benefit

Here’s a great example: Image
4. Easy To Click CTA’s

Pushing “Buy Now” is much harder to click than “Join The Challenge Now!”

How can you make the next step sound fun and exciting?

When you’re creating your buttons keep this in mind.

Here are some great examples: Image
5. Building Trust & Showing Authority

Trust is one of the hardest things to build up on a page. People don’t trust anything anymore.

To prove to your readers that you’re worthy of their time you need other people to tell them.

How can you do this?
Well…
The best way to display trust is through:
• logos of companies you’ve worked with
• written & video testimonials
• case studies of actual statistics
• a short “about us” section
• be transparent about everything you do & your product/company goals

Example above the fold: Image
Social proof should handle objections.

Is your product/service expensive?
Then highlight a testimonial like this:
“I was worried about the price before I bought but within a week I had made $1000!”

Make a list of possible objections readers might have and answer them like this.
Here are some questions you can ask your previous customers/clients to answer:

• what obstacle/objection would have prevented you from buying
• what did you get out of this (result-wise)?
• would you recommend this product/service? Why?

These usually handle most objections.
I'll never forget the time I booked a call with a trainer and was prepared to pay whatever his prices were.

It was all because I saw a video testimonial of a person with my exact injury experience a full recovery.

I ended up paying $5000 on that call just because of that video.
6. Images Throughout The Page

I have nothing against having some images and graphics around the page.

I do have something against them when they slow your site down though.

Conversions begin to drop off after a site takes longer than 3 seconds to load. So…
Here’s what you can do to speed up your site:
• shrink images with
• enable lazy loading
• test site speed with and go through their suggestions

Site speed is often reduced once you take away all the fancy stuff.

A good rule…tinypng.com
gmetrix.com
75%< of your site’s images/graphics should be helpful to the reader.

This includes:
• social proof
• product images
• pictures for emotion (humans)
• arrows

25% can be elements to make the page look nicer.

I say only 25% because more simple sites convert better. I promise.
7. Scanability

One of the most overlooked elements on a landing page.

Only 10% of people will actually read every word on your landing page. You need to play off this stat.

The best thing you can do is include a headline/subheading over every paragraph of text… Image
What do I mean by this?

If someone scrolls a little further down your page they should see one of these things:
• a new section w/headline
• a subheading inside a paragraph

You need to break up long chunks of text as much as possible. Even long sales letters have subheadings.
Another great way of doing this is by using:
• bold
• underlined
• italicized

Here’s how I use them all:
Bold - for words like FREE and crazy statistics
Underline - for big claims that I’m making for my product/service
Italics - to put emphasis on certain points or words

Ex: Image
At the bottom of some pages I even use a section that says:
“Did you scroll to the bottom? Well here’s what you missed…”

I use 3-6 sentences to say:
• what the offer is
• what the bonuses are
• what they should do now

I usually include a picture of the creator as well.
Ex: Image
Now you’ve learned everything that I put inside my landing pages and why I do it.

Here are sites I use:
figma(.)com → design
pngtree(.)com → pngs
lordicon(.)com → icons
gtmetrix(.)com → site speed
thriveCart(.)com → checkout
facebook(.)com/ads/library → competitors

And...
If you'd like help with your landing page?
DM me and I'll give you a couple of tips. I've worked on over 200 landing pages across 13+ different industries.

And one more thing...
I don't share everything here.

Client updates and free stuff goes here:
swiftlanding.co/sunday-marketer

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headline
subheading

VSL

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social proof…
pain points + creating interest

benefits with icons

3-5 step process broken down

more social proof

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money back guarantee

about the creator

more social proof…
CTA

qualifiers + more copy

FAQ

final CTA

This page WILL perform well but…
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