If I don't cite your paper here, please do not feel offended. It's not that I don't think you report your results badly, I just had to choose a few examples.
Ok, on to it:
Note how Jess sets the stage, makes a theoretical point, THEN shows evidence
Let me use Jess, Patrick, Pat and Barbara's insights (and mine) to make a point I've repeatedly made before:
You can use data (in this case, qualitative) to break free from your writer's block by writing the ANALYSIS of these data.
raulpacheco.org/2017/03/using-…
(or like Pat and Barbara would say, to build a Tiny Text, or like @jolijensen would say, to "stay in touch with my writing").
I have to finish a paper by Friday, so I can't continue this thread for today, but I'll be adding more pieces to this and my other two threads.