A few style thoughts about today's 3rd Circuit ruling smacking down the Trump Campaign's latest attempt to overturn the election results. Judge Bibas is fast becoming one of my favorite writers on the federal appellate bench. justsecurity.org/wp-content/upl… /1
First, notice how he moves effortlessly from "Trump Presidential Campaign" to just "Campaign" without the silly and unnecessary parenthetical (hereinafter "Campaign"). He knows we know which Campaign he means. /2 The Trump Presidential Campaign asserts that Pennsylvania's
Next, look as these teeny tiny transition words. They do lots of nearly-invisible work to move the reader effortlessly through the paragraph. /3 Nor does the Campaign deserve an injunction to undo Pennsylv
You love to see it. /4 The next morning, the Secretary of State (technically, Secre
The elegant way he describes statutory provisions throughout the opinion. Short, easy sentences that simplify the complex. /5 In Pennsylvania, each county runs its own elections. [cite]
His judicious use of informal phrasing here /6 But on any standard of review, the court got it right.
And here /7 The Campaign cites no authority for those propositions, and
OK, I could have done without this phrase. Yeet this word into the sun (along with seminal, while we're at it). /8 Bush v. Gore does not federalize every jot and tittle of sta
It's worth reading the whole thing. Every sentence feels accessible for lay readers and attorneys alike. /fin

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This is an excellent addition to the convo around becoming an LRW prof. I agree w/ everything @IreneTenCate says here, and want to link to a few key articles re where our profession needs to do better. /1
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Quick thread on being a new legal writer, with inspiration from Tony/Grammy/Oscar winner @benjpasek and This American Life’s @iraglass. /1
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Follow @misupportcircle everyone! That's who we worked with to donate frequent flyer miles.
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