A few style thoughts about today's 3rd Circuit ruling smacking down the Trump Campaign's latest attempt to overturn the election results. Judge Bibas is fast becoming one of my favorite writers on the federal appellate bench. justsecurity.org/wp-content/upl… /1
First, notice how he moves effortlessly from "Trump Presidential Campaign" to just "Campaign" without the silly and unnecessary parenthetical (hereinafter "Campaign"). He knows we know which Campaign he means. /2
Next, look as these teeny tiny transition words. They do lots of nearly-invisible work to move the reader effortlessly through the paragraph. /3
You love to see it. /4
The elegant way he describes statutory provisions throughout the opinion. Short, easy sentences that simplify the complex. /5
His judicious use of informal phrasing here /6
And here /7
OK, I could have done without this phrase. Yeet this word into the sun (along with seminal, while we're at it). /8
It's worth reading the whole thing. Every sentence feels accessible for lay readers and attorneys alike. /fin
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This is an excellent addition to the convo around becoming an LRW prof. I agree w/ everything @IreneTenCate says here, and want to link to a few key articles re where our profession needs to do better. /1
@sstrudeau@MayorTaylorA2 A few thoughts: The biggest thing that jumped out at me was in 5.2, which says "If the employee is unable to reply accurately, he/she will have the opportunity to review the appropriate written records before responding." /1
Quick thread on being a new legal writer, with inspiration from Tony/Grammy/Oscar winner @benjpasek and This American Life’s @iraglass. /1
Last night, at the Q&A for the new Dear Evan Hansen novel, an audience member asked what Benj (Pasek) and Jason (Paul) wish they had known when they were first starting out. /2
Benj responded by citing Ira Glass’s advice to new writers: Your stuff is going to be bad at first, especially when you compare it to work from those at the top of the field. That’s OK. DON’T GIVE UP. /3
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