1/How To Write Like An Editor -- a THREAD. 🤔👇✍️

As a writer & editor, I think about writing daily.

With more & more ppl starting newsletters & blogs, I often think about how ppl can level-up their writing skills. 🚀

Here's a crash-course in how to bullet-proof your writing.
2/First thing: grammar.

Poor grammar will kill great writing potential. 👉 Every. Damn. Time.

I'm not referring to style here; if you have shit grammar, you're telling me that you're too lazy to fix it.

Use @Grammarly & edit your damn post.

Learn to love multiple drafts. 🙌
3/Next: spelling.

This one is basic: we live in the era of google & spell-check -- don't get lazy here! 🤦‍♂️

If you don't care enough to correct your spelling, why should anyone care enough to read it?

☝️ Ftr, I'm talking consistent mistakes, not minor typos every now & again.
4/Keep your tenses straight.

Tensing is hard sometimes -- I struggle with it too at moments -- but consistent tensing leads to the best flow for your piece. 🌊

Don't know if the tense of something is right?

😉 Editor's secret: Read the wonky sentence aloud to yourself.
5/Look & feel (visual format) 🧐

Is it too blocky? Is it hard on the eye to read?

All these questions matter, esp. in the age of online media.

😮 In this context, break-ups are good! The "new paragraph" button is your friend & 2-5 sentences per paragraph is *plenty.*
6/Remember: "IBAC" 🤔

Stands for: Italics, Bold, All Caps.

Get them under control.

Too much bold & you're shouting at me; too many italics & you're making me read a French recipe. 🇫🇷🥖

All caps is akin to more yelling -- I'm not saying don't do it, but sparingly please.
7/Next: bullet-points. ⚫️

Love 'em, use 'em. But don't go overboard, I beg you.

⚫️ Would you wanna read that?
⚫️ Something like this?
⚫️ Wouldn't it annoy you?

Unless it's actually a list, you don't need them in every paragraph.

I'm reading your article not your grocery list.
8/Punctuation.

Please for the love of all that's good, check your punctuation. Learn the difference between a dash & a hyphen & use them to break up your text.

☝️ Rule: Hyphens are for combining words (like punk-rock) while dashes are used to break sentences.
9/Here's a biggie: Quotes

Here's the basic rule: double quotes (" ") are for the beginning/end of any quotation, while single quotes (' ') are for a quotation 👉 within 👈 a quotation.

Also, block quoting is helping for longer quotes in your pieces.
10/Colons & semi-colons

Please god don't use colons or semi-colons if you're not sure which one works. Your writing won't suffer much (or any) by not using them. (Rules in next tweet). 👇

😱 It will suffer A LOT by using them incorrectly.

☝️ Write at your own level of comfort.
11/Colons & semi-colons, cont'd:

👉 Colons (:) usually break a sentence before a list or before you move to a new clause/phrase meant to clarify the previous one.

👉 Semi-colons (;) are usually used to break a sentence into 2 independent clauses tackling the same idea.
12/Very important! 👉 Brackets [ ]

Brackets are used to tell the reader that you're altering the original quote, but mostly for formatting or tensing reasons.

Example: "Kurt Cobain drew influence[s] from many different artists."

💥 [Brackets] are NOT the same as (parentheses).
13/Ok, now: Thesis

This is the “idea” we all learned about in 3rd grade that “goes at the end of your first paragraph.”

Except that’s bullshit.

Your thesis is your main concept & doesn’t necessarily need to come at the end of your 1st paragraph. It goes wherever it fits best.
14/Don't feel bullied into putting it in a particular place because -- like the "5-paragraph essay" -- it's how you were taught.

I'm certainly not criticizing teachers.

Recognize that we're likely taught this way because these are teaching devises, not rules carved into stone.
15/Embrace the flexibility! 💪

There is no 1,2,3-step process for plugging in paragraphs and building an essay that way. It's more nuanced than that.

Experiment with what looks & sounds good; learn to love the flexibility, starting with your thesis.
16/Now onto your argument:

Repeat after me: Your thesis is the concept or topic you’re going to tackle; your argument is how you hammer your points home. 🔨

You got the main idea down -- now hit me with those links, quotes, & nuanced data points to make me listen!
17/Lemme circle back to my shade re: the 5-paragraph essay:

It's meant to be a learning tool, not something you *need* to do.

Often it’s too constraining & makes people put in (or leave out) points depending on how many spots they have left between their intro and conclusion.
18/Now that you've laid out your thesis & have your argument bubbling, hammer it home.

If I can drive a truck through holes in your argument, reexamine it. 🚛

Leave some flexibility for yourself so you don’t back yourself into a corner, but make your argument solid.
19/Ok...let's talk length:

In our bite-sized, bloggish culture, the concept of writing anything long is considered “old” & “ramble-y.” Posts that appear “too long” are labeled “tl;dr” and relegated to the bottom of the pile.

But the reality is that some pieces should be longer.
20/Length cont'd:

Or maybe not.

If you’re giving me a list of tips, let me know at the beginning that it’s a listicle.

If it’s just a fleeting thought, don’t gear me up for a long thought-piece, otherwise when you end abruptly, it feels like the bottom just dropped out.
21/Even more on length...

But if it’s an argument that demands long-form length, then be damn sure you give the piece what it requires.

😱☝️ Trying to squeeze too much into a bite-sized article tells your readers you have no idea how to articulate what you want to say.
22/Learn to cut well. ✂️

Be honest with yourself: if those extra 2 paragraphs don’t serve your argument or style, kick ’em to the curb.

There’s nothing as paralyzing as “blank-page” syndrome, but there’s nothing more unsightly than flabby content that serves no purpose. 🤮
23/Here's the editor's secret: 🤫

😃 If you write 3 pages & delete everything except for the 1 paragraph that’s exceptionally promising, it’s a good day!

Now you have something concrete to build on. 🏗️

Knowing how to use length well in your writing is as important as anything.
24/Style -- it's what can make your writing incredible or boring.

It's your choice!

🎸 Style in writing is like style in music: take influences from people you like, but never try to copy them.

Find your own voice & lean into it! 🗣️
25/So that's the basic rundown.

Start doing those things tomorrow & I guarantee your writing will feel tighter & more focused almost immediately. 😎

For a little more depth, check out my article, from which this thread was adapted. 😆🚀

End (for now).

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1/It seems highly appropriate that I'm listening to this episode on allyship & inclusion during the week of the #AllRaiseVCSummit. 🤔

Definitely going to be breaking down some of the key points that @jenniferbrown makes here. 🙌

cc @AllRaise
@jenniferbrown @AllRaise 2/Key point one:

You're not an ally by slapping the badge on yourself and declaring "I am an ally" 🤔

"Inclusive leadership is measured by those around you who deem you to be an inclusive leader, and that's something that you earn." -- @jenniferbrown
@jenniferbrown @AllRaise 3/Learning to be an inclusive leader may be broadly uncomfortable sometimes, precisely because you're growing. Inclusion should be something deep in your core, & it's that welcoming of said growth that is a metric for a good leader. 🚀via @jenniferbrown
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