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How do you hook customers like the pros?

These 6 sales copywriters have generated more than $10,000,000,000 (billion!) in sales.

Here are their most famous techniques πŸ§΅πŸ‘‡
1. David Ogilvy's "Steal From The News" Technique

One of Ogilvy's most well-known ads was for Rolls-Royce.

The big idea?

"At 60 mph the loudest noise comes from the electric clock."

He stole this line from a press review of the car, and put it stage center.

Positioning 101
2. Gary Halbert's "Dear Reader" Technique

Halbert (who made millions writing sales letters for brands) also had a paid newsletter.

His signature style was to start each letter with, "Dear Friend and Subscriber."

He spoke directly to their wants & needs.

And he made a fortune.
3. Craig Clemens' "Documentary" Technique

A number of years ago, @craigclemens wrote one of the most successful sales letters in history.

Except it wasn't a sales letter.

It was a "documentary" educating people on "leaky gut syndrome."

Which framed the solution: probiotics.
4. Evaldo Albuquerque's "1 Core Belief" Technique

How do you generate $120+ million in product sales 2 years?

It all starts with changing 1 core belief in the reader.

Moving them FROM the way they think TO a new way.

And it takes 10 questions to move them there.
5. Eugene Schwartz's "Hidden Desires" Technique

Schwartz wrote the book on copywriting, called Breakthrough Advertising.

In it, he explains how people have overt desires and HIDDEN desires.

Speak to the hidden stuff and you'll hook people's attention.
6. Gary Bencivenga's "Metaphor" Technique

Gary had a "golden rule" for writing sales letters that moved people.

Using metaphors.

This was a signature in so many of Gary's best-selling ads. He calls it "The Golden Key of Persuasion."

Metaphors are sticky & easy to understand.
6 billion-dollar tips to write sales copy like the pros:

β€’ Steal ideas from the news
β€’ Address readers/customers directly
β€’ Document the issue (vs sell the solution)
β€’ Change 1 core belief
β€’ Talk about the customer's "hidden desires"
β€’ Use metaphors
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Formatting.

Here's my 4-step formatting framework to make your writing easier to skim, read, and share (🧡):
Step 1: Start every section with a single-sentence opener.

When you open each area of your work with a single sentence, you:

β€’ Keep readers interested
β€’ Make things easier to read
β€’ Subconsciously encourage them to continue

Here are the 6 most effective openers: Image
Step 2: Use the 1/3/1 writing rhythm.

You can also use:

β€’ 1/4/1
β€’ 1/5/1
β€’ 1/2/5/2/1
β€’ Etc.

The key to injecting skimmability into your writing is alternating the length of sentences and sections.

Here's some more on the 1/3/1 rhythm πŸ‘‡
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Jul 1
I've generated $10,000,000+ with my writing.

But most people think making a living as a writer is hard.

Here are the 5 steps to make your first $1 million as a writer (that you can start today): Image
For context, I have:

β€’ Sold tens of thousands of copies of my books
β€’ Built multiple 6-figure writing businesses
β€’ Built two 7-figure writing businesses
β€’ Earned $150,000+ writing for Inc Magazine
β€’ Earned $250,000+ from Medium's Partner Program

Now let's talk money:
Step 1: Give 99% away for free.

Write for free.

Educate for free.

Everything you know about a topic? Give it away for free.

Writers always want to "skip" to the money part.

Because if you can't get people to read your FREE work, you'll never get them to buy your paid work.
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I can write a 60,000-word book in 30 days.

Here's the 7-step system I use every time:

(This works even if you've never written a book before): Image
Disclaimer:

This only works for content where you're already the expert/speaking from personal experience.

If you're researching a NEW topic/something you know nothing about, then it will take you longer.

But once you HAVE the information, you can write fast.

Here's howπŸ‘‡
Step 1: Name The House

A great book is not a bunch of words.

A great book is an idea, presented coherently, in a way that walks the reader's thinking FROM where they currently are TO somewhere new & different.

Before you write a single word, where are you taking the reader?
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I write 5,000 words every day.

How?

By treating my writing like a mental sport.

Here are 9 simple habits I use to stay mentally fit as a pro writer: Image
1/ Read 1-2 pages of a thesaurus

This takes me 15 minutes every morning.

It’s a great brain exercise and teaches you a lot about language.

Words are your tools, so keep adding to your toolbox.

Here's how I fit it into my routine:
2/ Journal daily

90% of being a writer is understanding your own journey.

Journaling helps you process life events, see your progress, & visualize your future.

With it, you write from the scar, not the wound.
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Meet John Grisham.

He’s the author of 49 consecutive #1 bestsellers.

His books have been made into movies starring Tom Cruise, Sandra Bullock, and Samuel L. Jackson.

Here are 10 of his timeless writing insights (on talent, routine, and dealing with criticism): Image
1/ Grisham sets himself tough creative constraints:

β€’ Start a novel on Jan 1st
β€’ Write daily for 3 hours
β€’ Finish it by July 1st

The key?

His tightly controlled writing environment (down to the coffee he drinks):
2/ Grisham pumps out one novel every year.

But he can only do this by avoiding a *huge* mistake a lot of writers make:
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In 1966, Eugene Schwartz created a timeless framework:

The 5 Stages of Customer Awareness.

Master this and you can sell *anything* to *anybody*.

Here's how to train ChatGPT on this framework to write better copy hooks (with the *exact* prompts I use): Image
Schwartz's framework:

Every customer is always at one level of awareness:

β€’ Unaware: β€œLife’s good!”
β€’ Problem Aware: β€œSomething’s off.”
β€’ Solution Aware: β€œSo many choices.”
β€’ Product Aware: β€œI like you!”
β€’ Most Aware: β€œBuy now!”

Your copy must meet them where they're at.
Step 1: Ask ChatGPT to assume your target audience’s identity

β€’ Targeting single mom’s? Tell ChatGPT to act like a single mom.
β€’ Targeting DIY renovators? Tell ChatGPT to act like DIY renovators.

Then tell it how your business helps the target audience. πŸ‘‡ Image
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