No crazy illustrations or animations. Straight to the point.
One of the biggest reasons this page converts so well is the compelling copy and offer.
Above the fold:
High converting copy: When writing the copy it’s critical to know your audience. This brand's entire audience is African Americans. As you can see in the first sentence of the copy it says “African-owned businesses make up only 11% of all businesses.”
This creates an EMOTIONAL response in the readers and compels them to support this African-owned business.
With products like jewelry that don’t have a measurable benefit, you need to be creative with your copy.
Emotion sells.
The rest of the copy above the fold helps build scarcity and trust.
Everyone loves to bash on building scarcity. If you do it correctly it works.
There is a right way and wrong way to build scarcity. The wrong way is a countdown timer, low stock bar, and other gimmicks.
Social Proof and Guarantee - The most common objections and questions are addressed above the fold so a customer does not even need to scroll to the FAQ section.
“3312 Reviews” above the fold. Always want to have reviews above the fold.
Section 2 - High AOV tiered bundles that work
There are many ways to do bundles. To maximize AOV and take rate your bundles should be:
An irresistible offer - You want the customer to feel stupid to not take the highest AOV bundle (3 necklaces). For the three necklaces bundle, the customer practically gets the third necklace for free.
Very profitable - When creating bundles, especially for high margin products you have tons of wiggle room and bundles can be very lucrative. The take rate on these bundles is very high. Test your bundle offers and combinations until you see what performs best. This is what we did
Accordion - All the information that customers like to know before purchasing is contained in an organized bundle. Doing this optimizes the real estate on the page and customers don’t have to scroll through blocks of information.
Reviews - Unmissable CTA to leave a review.
Obtaining a 6%+ CVR is very difficult in e-commerce. The first go-around of this page did not have a 6% CVR. It took tons of tests and changes to the page to get it to 6%+
You should always be A/B testing changes to your pages. A day without a test running is $ on the table
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If you have a many similar SKU’s, add a compare page
If you go onto your Google analytics behavior flow and notice lots of back-and-forth comparing products this is usually a sign customers need a compare page
Really nice how you can choose the bikes you want to compare via the dropdown and then also the color. It compares the bikes across many metrics like speed, battery and range
We started working with one of the biggest e-bike brands in the US a few months ago.
Here is how we were able to increase their conversion rate over 30%
(and how you can do the same for your store)
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Preface
The company FLX Bike sells high-end electric bikes starting from $1,500. Their conversion rate was struggling and they knew they needed to optimize their site before summer when they had a bigger sales rush.
Phase 1: Research
We put together a 175 page research report that dove into every leak in their funnel.
Here are some of the tools we used to conduct our research:
-Scrollmaps
-Clickmaps
-User testing
-Surveys (on-site, post purchase, exit intent)
I took a $2,000 course on writing high-converting product page copy so you don’t have to
Here is what you need to know + a FREE copy template doc included
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To be a great copywriter you need to know your customers better than they know themselves. Every single pain point, insecurity, or doubt they may have should be reflected in the copy you write
But how do you know your customers' fears, desires, and pain points?
Want to see a step-by-step breakdown of how we are increasing our client's AOV by 40%+?
Requires zero developers and only 3 apps.
If you follow this step-by-step you will create 8 different opportunities for a customer to spend more.
The first thing you need is to have multiple products (preferable 3) but two are fine. These products need to help solve a similar problem or go well together.
For this thread, I am going to use Gleamin as an example. They sell a clay mask, a moisturizer, and a serum.
Here is how their current product page looks for the mask (their flagship product)