β Trying to blackmail the reader (My mother & I lived under the bridge to ensure I went to school). This doesn't work again.
β Spending time writing irrelevant things that don't show why the school should select you.
β Ignoring your experience and the impacts you made.
β Having a disorganized and unaligned document. Most SOP's don't have any paragraph. It is not a good writing style.
β Not talking about the βWhy.β There are so many Whyβs you should address - Why Bioinformatics? Why the University of Toronto? Why is it important for you?
β Stating unrealistic goals. (I want to get a PhD because I will change the world/home country). Be realistic, please!
These are a few flags; when I start the weekly SOP & CV reviews, I will be correcting some narratives here.
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πTo make an addition, use any of the following words:
β Furthermore
β Besides
β Apart from this
β In addition
β Lastly
β Moreover
β Along with
β Equally important
β Not only... but also...
πTo make an emphasis, try the following:
β Indeed
β Undeniably
β It should be noted that
β Undoubtedly
β Obviously
β Without reservation
πTo make a comparison, try the following:
- In contrast
- Meanwhile
- Although
- Whereas
β Yet
- On the other hand
- However
- Nevertheless
- On the contrary
- By comparison
1.Introduction: Briefly talk about the literature in your research, highlighting the gap and what your research seeks to do.
2.Research Questions: What questions are you curious about & will your research/thesis answer?
3.Literature Review: Highlight what has been said by other authors
4.Research Methodology: What methods will you use to carry out your research? Qualitative, Quantitative, Comparative? etc. What are the primary and secondary sources used for the research?
5. Study Plan: How long will it take you to conclude your research? Add it!
6. Conclusion: What do you expect to come out of this research?
NB: Check the universityβs website for clarification. The following thread has at least 2 Research Proposal templates & other tips
1. Bentley University (Waltham, MA): All PhD students receive a full tuition scholarship, individual student health insurance. Fellowships typically range from $30,000-$36,000 per year.
2. Ohio State University, Fisher College of Business (Columbus, OH): Fully-funded, including a stipend and tuition costs. The funding may come in
the form of fellowships, research assistantships, teaching assistantships, supplemental grants, etc.
3. Rice University, Jones School of Graduate Business (Houston, TX): Full financial assistance and a stipend of $40,000 will be offered to each admitted student in the PhD program in the form of a research assistantship.
1. Clark University: All incoming graduate students are guaranteed the same tuition remission and a minimum of three years of initial assistantship funding.
2. Florida State University: Current funding for qualified students is $18,014 per year (fall and spring) plus all tuition credit hours (with a possibility of summer teaching for an additional $2,500).
3. Indiana University Bloomington: offers competitive opportunities for graduate funding, including research assistantships, associate instructorships, and fellowships for 5 years.