๐To make an addition, use any of the following words:
โ Furthermore
โ Besides
โ Apart from this
โ In addition
โ Lastly
โ Moreover
โ Along with
โ Equally important
โ Not only... but also...
๐To make an emphasis, try the following:
โ Indeed
โ Undeniably
โ It should be noted that
โ Undoubtedly
โ Obviously
โ Without reservation
๐To make a comparison, try the following:
- In contrast
- Meanwhile
- Although
- Whereas
โ Yet
- On the other hand
- However
- Nevertheless
- On the contrary
- By comparison
๐To make a repetition, try the following:
โ In other words
โ In essence
โ As previously mentioned
โ As discussed earlier
โ As previously stated
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โ Trying to blackmail the reader (My mother & I lived under the bridge to ensure I went to school). This doesn't work again.
โ Spending time writing irrelevant things that don't show why the school should select you.
โ Ignoring your experience and the impacts you made.
โ Having a disorganized and unaligned document. Most SOP's don't have any paragraph. It is not a good writing style.
โ Not talking about the โWhy.โ There are so many Whyโs you should address - Why Bioinformatics? Why the University of Toronto? Why is it important for you?
โ Stating unrealistic goals. (I want to get a PhD because I will change the world/home country). Be realistic, please!