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Want to boost your Copywriting through Storytelling?

It's easier than you think.

This story of 19-year-old Muhammad Ali will show you how: 👇 Image
It starts in 1961:

Sports Illustrated wants photos of the 19 year old boxer who took Gold at the 1960 Olympic games:

Muhammad Ali

The soon to be heavyweight world champion. Image
They hired freelance photographer Flip Schulke.

Since 1956, Flip has covered:

• MLK & the civil rights movement
• US & European Politics
• NASA Space program

He jumps to photograph the young boxer. Image
Schulke and Ali meet.

Schulke shows underwater pictures of water-skiing to impress Ali from a story he did for Life magazine.

Schulke thought he was convincing Ali to allow him to take photos.

But he didn't realize Ali was paying attention. Image
The next day,

Schulke meets Ali mid-training ...in a pool.

He asks: "Why train in water?"

Ali replies: "Oh, I’ve always done this. An old trainer up in Louisville told me that if I practice in the pool, the water resistance acts just like a weight." Image
Schulke took underwater photos of Ali and sent them to Sports Illustrated.

The photos were rejected.

They said it was crazy for a boxer to train in a pool & wouldn't post the photos.

So, he turned to Life Magazine with the underwater photos.

And got the go-ahead.
Schulke dove into the pool with Ali again.

Spent hours taking several photos.

Until he sees Ali do something unexpected...
Schulke saw Ali standing at the bottom of the pool.

Still as a statue in a perfect boxing pose.

This later became one of the most popular photos in Sports history. Image
Schulke sends the photos to Life Magazine.

And Ali's Career skyrockets to a house-hold name.

He gets more press & coverage because of his strange training style.

More people attended his fights.

Leading to more prize money. Image
3 years later.

Ali wins the heavyweight boxing championship.

Schulke returns to photograph him again.

He brings the scrapbook of the underwater photos.

Ali laughs and winks at him. Image
Schulke asks what's wrong.

Ali tells him:

He made up the underwater training.

He doesn't train underwater.

He doesn't even know how to swim.

Ali fooled Schulke and the world.

And made millions because of it.

How?
At age 19, Ali understood how to use storytelling to sell himself.

He studied his customer (Schulke):

Back in 1961, when Schulke first showed Ali water-skiing photos, Ali noticed how passionate Schulke was about water photography.

So, Ali gave Schulke exactly what he wanted:
Ali targeted Schulke's desire of wanting more water photography.

And fulfilled it with a unique boxing style.

That combination increased the popularity for him & Schulke.

Win-Win.
In a way... Ali was a master storyteller and copywriter:

• He studied his audience
• Understood their desires
• Provided them with a solution

His photo fooled the world.

Boosted his popularity.

Made him a legend.
Want to use Storytelling to boost your business?

Understand your customer before they even meet you.

And give them the story they desire. Image
Thanks for reading!

If you found this helpful,

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They dominate by using storytelling on their landing pages.

Specifically Dan Harmon’s Story Circle framework.

Let's break down how Notion uses the Story Circle to get millions of new users on board: Image
Dan Harmon’s Story Circle framework (for your landing page):

1. Protagonist: Customer
2. Need: Desire
3. Go: Your landing page
4. Search: Landing page content.
5. Find: CTA
6. Take: The price
7. Return: Back to daily life
8. Change: Life is better with product
1/ Protagonist

Notion’s Landing Page protagonist is clear.

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Attention spans keep getting smaller.

You only get a few seconds to capture your reader's attention.

Hook 'em in with these 10 micro-copywriting frameworks:
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S: Share a quick story.

O: Highlight the outcome.

B: Present the benefits. Image
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P: Highlight a problem.

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This story has stuck with me for years 👇

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Inside the small boat were several large yellowfin tuna.

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Stop guessing. Start testing.

I run subject line A/B tests every week for my newsletter of ~12,000 readers.

Here're 10 recent test learnings you can apply to your subject lines:
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I wish I had learned these 7 quick-hitting copywriting tips when starting out:
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Be ruthless when editing copy (edit as if it costs you money).
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Stop writing boring copy.

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• But
• And
• Still
• You see
• However
• Moving on

This helps you abruptly start a new paragraph/sentence.

And increase flow & continuity in your copy.
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But I'm about to show you the best cold email I've received in YEARS.

This email was so damn good, I all but replied:

"Take my money!"

Here are 7 reasons why it worked (and how you can replicate it):
Before we dive in:

I want you to carefully read every word in the email as you go through this thread.

Notice how there isn't one word that's out of place.

Every line transitions perfectly into the next line.

Note: Read the tweet first, then the full image.

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1. Personalization

Not a novel concept by any stretch...

But executed perfectly here.

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