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Carly Hayward, Editor
@FromCarly
Book Light Editorial & #RevPit editor, @storychatradio co-host. Disabled. You'll usually find me cuddling w/ a cup of tea and a great book. She/her
Oct 25, 2019 • 35 tweets • 20 min read
It's time for my #RevPit #10Queries! Get ready for a very long thread where I analyze 10 anonymous queries and 1st 5 pages. They were all great in their own way, but they all could grow and be slightly more polished. However, I want to read them ALL! Hurry and get pubbed! Q1: YA Scifi, Very interesting concept, but falls a little flat at times with over explaining the plot. Try to use more gripping words and show more personality in the query. Great hook at the end, but could use more of that mystery up front. #RevPit #10Queries