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https://twitter.com/mengesdesign/status/1235035912402329602Is there any opportunity to give the C the same snappy asymmetry of the A and B? They both have major and minor gestures, where the C is a lot more evenly balanced.

He’d written to ask about whether his initial draft was becoming too generic, and losing the charm of the original — an important and very delicate question. I’m always apprehensive of projects that revive “naive” lettering, because they run the risk of... ->
I’ve added a couple of words to your proof that might be illustrative. (Ultimately you’ll want lots more.) Take a look at the word ‘monorail’: to my eye, there’s something funny happening in the rhythm of m/o/n/o: —>
https://twitter.com/paulvonexcite/status/1231289453152473089Here’s a look at the comparative size of the joins between letters. Not necessarily a problem, but the E-T is the biggest: wonder if that’s what’s making it look odd to you? —>
https://twitter.com/jessicahische/status/1230982118651514880I wonder if turning the S clockwise is all it needs? (Also possible that you’ll want to add weight in the spine, but I’d start with rotating it, to see if it helps.) —>