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Tony Murphy
@asktoeknee
Becoming the Rick Rubin of presentation design @AskTonyDesign | xProduct Designer @ Alto Pharmacy, Mozilla VPN/Pocket, Yahoo Mail 🏎️ 🎱
Jun 30, 2022 • 7 tweets • 6 min read
Congrats @SamDeBrule @kevinthau @sparkcapital!

A well crafted presentation. Best I've seen recently.

But I think you can push it a little further next round.

I run a pitch design studio, and we audited your deck for fun.

Here are 6 opportunities to make it more compelling. Image Our story framework informs our recommendations.

We use it to break down content into components.

It's our venture spin on the Story Circle, a timeless structure. Image