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Advertorials, Listicles, Cold Traffic Funnels and CRO For 7-8 Fig DTC Ecom Brands
Jun 9, 2023 11 tweets 4 min read
Agency LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

@daniel_peleg helps eCom brands increase revenue by 35% and scale by managing their emails.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image Here are the main problems with the old page:

- long loading times😱 (conversions=killed)
- page is too crammed
- no structure
- CTA is not a real CTA
Jun 7, 2023 11 tweets 5 min read
Agency LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

@mikeygiustizia helps Ecom brands explode their organic reach through TikTok.

But his landing page could use some help.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image 1) NAVBAR

On most agency landing pages, the only action we want the visitor to take is to book a call. Having a menu button takes away the focus from the CTA.

It's better to only leave the logo. Image
Jun 2, 2023 4 tweets 1 min read
Ecom LANDING PAGE REDESIGN

@Chamberlaincof sells tasty and high-quality coffee and beverages.

Here's what I would do to 3x conversions: Image - Changed copy in the top bar to reflect the ongoing offer on shipping
- Simplified the navbar with just the menu, logo, and cart
- Gave the image much more space
- Changed headline copy to not confuse visitors
- Added social proof with customer reviews and features on magazines
May 31, 2023 9 tweets 4 min read
Agency LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

@jordan_ross_8F helped 600+ agencies exit their operations and build 7+ figures MACHINES.

But his landing page could use some help.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image 1) HEADLINE

The headline copy on the old page is weak.

I rewrote it and made it pop more, highlighting the meaningful words

- 3x revenue, 7+ figures (the result)
- automation model (the leverage) Image
May 27, 2023 9 tweets 4 min read
Agency LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

HeySocial, by @SimonChoucrounz, crafts Ad Creatives that scale profitably and drive millions in revenue.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image 1) NAVBAR

The navbar is taking up too much screen space and the menu button is useless mainly because it's a single page.

It also takes away the focus from the main clickable, the CTA.

So I removed it and only left the centered logo. Image
May 23, 2023 10 tweets 4 min read
SaaS LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

Inframail is a tool by @KidousProAtLife to build reliable and scalable cold email machines.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image The tool is still in private access mode so even the old page is not final.

Let's refresh it for the official release!

What needs work / to be added:

- No CTA
- Weak headline copy, and takes up too much screen space
- No social proof
- VSL out of the screen
May 22, 2023 11 tweets 4 min read
Agency LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

At Bevac Agency, @TylerBevacqua works with eCom brands to lower customer acquisition costs.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image Let's have a look at the weak spots of the old page:

- Upper banner taking too much space
- Crammed navbar with many clickables
- Weak headline copy
- No brief explanation of the service
- CTA is too small, almost secondary
- No social proof
May 19, 2023 9 tweets 3 min read
SaaS LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

LeadBook is a tool built by @jossumpossum to leverage Facebook for lead generation.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image Before starting with the redesign, I looked at the page to spot the current problems.

Here are the weak spots I found:

- Logo taking up too much screen space
- Headline taking up too much screen space
- VSL half-in half-out, unclickable
- No CTA
- No Social Proof
May 15, 2023 9 tweets 4 min read
LANDING PAGE REDESIGN📈

@theclipcurator is the biggest name in the short-form space.

But his landing page could use some help.

Here's what he should do to 3x his conversions...

>> THREAD🧵 << Image 1) Headline

Let's make the headline bigger, clearer, and bolder.

It should be used as the main claim: a high-quality short-form video production system that generates viral content.

It's useful to highlight the main words:

- short-form (what we do)
- viral content (result) Image