I think a lot about Chuck Jones' famous rules for his Road Runner cartoons. I'm trying to do something similar for what I'm hoping to be my next TV show.
My version is more "core principles" than specific storytelling rules, though I'd like to eventually spell out the latter as well. Maybe it's my poetry background, or my start in writing procedural mysteries, but I need an inner formal logic whenever I write a script.
I think that's why I like working in genre -- and usually seek out films that are in a genre vein. I like having a constellation of expectations for a story to work through, or break away from. Something for the writing to spin against, to paraphrase my teacher Miller Williams.
A sample sentence from my in-progress core principles for a TV show about class, labor, coal, family, & American identity:
"Dramatically, nothing is more boring than liberal talking points pitched against conservative talking points. Except maybe vice versa."
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I think post-production is the most underrated pivotal element of a TV writer's life. It's probably also the thing I miss the most when I'm between seasons/shows. It was largely a mystery to me even during my five seasons on LONGMIRE, as the writing staff wasn't involved w/ post.
So when I sold DAMNATION and its pilot got the green light to be filmed, it was actually my first time in post-production. The stakes felt crazy high. So did the stress levels. TV schedules are brutally short. I had to catch on really, really quickly.
About my only experiences up to this point were: overhearing my Longmire showrunner on the phone and in meetings discussing post issues (I took mental notes), sitting in with other crew members as Jimmy Muro screened his cut of a LONGMIRE episode and solicited our notes, and...
Writing mysteries-of-the-week for LONGMIRE is still my most challenging writing gig. Each one needs: a catchy hook, a well-hidden perp, a clever Longmire way of solving it, & an emotionally-resonant reason for the crime. Plus, it ideally reflects on Walt's current state of mind.
Breaking, outlining, writing, revising, prepping, & producing three of these a season for five seasons was the best TV writing education I could ever receive. I return to my showrunner Greer Shephard's guidance all the time, especially her emphasis on scheduling information.
That is, what gets revealed when in a scene. Identifying what the major card each scene holds, and when and how you lay that card down. Or, also: how to distract the viewer/Walt so the actual important clue registers, but their attention is on something that looks like a clue.
When I decided to leave academia in order to pursue screenwriting, I also decided to change my culture habits. My brain needed rewiring. All cerebral navel-gazing post-modernism was out. I watched Sons of Anarchy & listened mostly to Johnny Cash & AC/DC & Gn'R. It sorta worked.
Since rewiring my brain into a more elemental, foundational, structurally-sound creative instrument and sorta establishing myself professionally, I've largely been trying to recalibrate in order to let the poetry & weirdness & occasionally even the intellect back in.
I sometimes feel guilty because I rarely take up other peoples' movie/TV/music suggestions. Not too guilty, tho. Most of the art that I take in is actually geared at me trying to get my creative brain and my instincts in tune with what I think it needs at any given moment.
PAT GARRETT & BILLY THE KID (1973). For the longest time, this has been my favorite western. I think it's also the best film ever made about no longer being a young man. It feels like the end of 8 separate epics. It creates & sustains a feeling that no other film approximates.
My favorite scene of any film ever is the "Knocking on Heaven's Door" sequence where Coburn & Slim Pickens & Katy Jurado make their raid on LQ Jones' homestead, ending w/ Pickens's death by the water. It's what -- 3 minutes long? But has the compressed knowledge of a great poem.
My 2nd favorite sequence in any film is also in PAT GARRETT. It's at the end, again scored by Dylan, where Kristofferson & Rita Coolidge arrive at Pete Maxwell's house. Recollections of a pointless death + young lovers' tenderness + the approach of angels of death: most of life.
THE MASTER (2012). In the final analysis, despite my best intentions, I'm a pretty basic film bro. I'm most at home w/ Tarantino, the Coens, PTA. I dig Fincher & Nolan quite a bit less than my type. But I love me some Kubrick. And worship Scorsese. Very basic bro stuff.
Even in my film bro-ness, I've continually found myself resisting THE MASTER. But weirdly I've kept returning to it, I think because I find the first 40 minutes so visually captivating. This time, I think I internalized the film's (non) structure enough to get into its vibe.
I have some theories. One theory: the only reason PTA ever works as a writer is because he always gets PTA to direct his scripts. In the same way that Tarantino is only interesting as a director because he always gets to direct Quentin Tarantino scripts.
JOKER (2019). The boys (12 & 10) had been wanting to see this after they flipped out for Heath Ledger's take on the character. I have zero emotional investment in the Batman mythos, so I take this film as just a movie. It was a top 5 film for me last year. Totally holds up.
I don't care that it's just transposing TAXI DRIVER & KING OF COMEDY into the DC universe. I actually think that's an inspired creative decision akin to Leone transposing YOJIMBO into the West in FISTFUL OF DOLLARS or Kurosawa transposing RED HARVEST into the world of YOJIMBO.
What I care about: JOKER carefully -- almost classically -- builds up Arthur Fleck piece by piece and crisis by crisis until we understand and sympathize with the human underneath the mythic mask. Story wise, it's more disciplined than anything Nolan did. Better visuals, too.