How to write good copy…

Tell a story.

When you tell stories, you speak to the entire person, not just their conscious.

The audience puts themselves in the character’s shoes.

The following is fictions example
Remember the format:

Character:
Problem:
Guide:
Plan:
CTA
Result:

If there is no problem, the story is not worth telling...
Character: Nichole is a marketing manager for a SaaS startup.
Problem: Due to cut backs and the pandemic, she lost her two marketing associates and became a team of one.

The company went from a staff of 20 to a staff of 5 with no official sales team, and it was up to her to market the company and drive sales.
Guide: In a state of desperation, she turned to her network for some guidance.

An old friend from her college days saw the plea for help and connected her with Jordon, a marketer that specializes in email marketing.
Plan: After several conversations, it was determined that she had a big enough list of potential consumers that if she adjusted her approach, sales would start to increase.

Jordon worked with Nichole to develop a series of stories that connected with the audience.
CTA: Jordon invited Nichole to stop sending emails out that focused on facts and benefits and implement the newly developed, story-based strategy.

Nichole’s entire career was on the line.

This was the only option she and the company could afford.
Result: The first series of emails went out, and nothing happened.

She kept the course.

The second series went out and she noticed a bump in traffic.

The third series went out and she noticed sales starting to increase.

The stories worked. The company recovered/grew.
I dedicate this thread to @JordanJHopkins, @ThatChristinaG, @myfriendjanine, and @Julian

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