Because these are much too good to never see the light of day, I present A Series Of Sidebar Conversations With My Editor @KBSpangler 
We have some slight disagreements about punctuation.
Sometimes I name the ellipses so that she can't kill them.
She gets very excited when I use colons correctly because I hate them.
She has pointed out that in any of my books where people travel, it is always terrible.
Also I have a problem with horses. I believe she had just noted an example in the text.
The slow burn is difficult for her.
...extremely difficult...
It always comes back to punctuation eventually.
Really, really not good at the slow burn.
Fluffy romance (mild spoilers.)
But in the end, a good editor knows that sometimes the author needs positive reinforcement, too.
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