Let's talk about distinguishing cases! I often see students make the error that the 5th Circuit made here. But my students are 1Ls; I *expect* them to make this error, and it's my job to point it out. So what, exactly, did the 5th Circuit get wrong? /1
I'll leave the substantive Bivens question to the experts. But here's the writing point I want my students to learn: When distinguishing cases, it's not enough to say "here are ways in which the facts of this case differ from the facts of that case." /2
You also have to explain *why those differences are legally significant.* Every case is different from the precedent case in a bunch of ways. But it's the "why should these differences lead to a different outcome" explanation that makes the legal analysis sound. /3
So, respectfully, perhaps some 5th Circuit judges need a refresher from their LRW course? (Or - really - any decent 1L course. Every time we discuss hypotheticals we are really asking "Should these slightly different facts lead do a different outcome? Why or why not?") /fin
• • •
Missing some Tweet in this thread? You can try to
force a refresh
Mazel tov to AG Garland! In honor of his retirement from the DC Circuit, here's a #WilenskyOnStyle thread unpacking some of his writing choices from his final reported opinion. It's an admin law case, a great one to showcase how good writers handle complex regulatory schemes. /1
The case is Mirror Lake Village, LLC v. Wolf, an immigration case handed down in August 2020. Full opinion here: cadc.uscourts.gov/internet/opini… /2
Judge Garland developed lots of experience breaking down regs during his time on the bench. Here's how he works through law in three paragraphs: One para that describes the statutory terms, one for the regulatory terms, and one that describes how it works in practice./3
Hi folks! The 11th Cir. handed down a new election opinion yesterday and if you’ve been following me you won’t be surprised that I have Some Things To Say about C.J. Pryor’s writing choices. (I’m going to use #WilenskyOnStyle – h/t @daniellecitron – to collect these threads.) /1
This thread is especially directed at law students. Judicial opinions differ from legal memos, motions, etc. – different purposes, different audiences – but this opinion happens to use some standard techniques that work well for many kinds of legal writing. /3
The 11th Cir. just issued an order denying the GOP's latest attempt to overturn election results, this time in Georgia. And while the opinion has plenty for procedure nerds to love, I'm going to focus on the aspects of Judge Brasher's opinion that us style nerds love. /1
A few style thoughts about today's 3rd Circuit ruling smacking down the Trump Campaign's latest attempt to overturn the election results. Judge Bibas is fast becoming one of my favorite writers on the federal appellate bench. justsecurity.org/wp-content/upl… /1
First, notice how he moves effortlessly from "Trump Presidential Campaign" to just "Campaign" without the silly and unnecessary parenthetical (hereinafter "Campaign"). He knows we know which Campaign he means. /2
Next, look as these teeny tiny transition words. They do lots of nearly-invisible work to move the reader effortlessly through the paragraph. /3
This is an excellent addition to the convo around becoming an LRW prof. I agree w/ everything @IreneTenCate says here, and want to link to a few key articles re where our profession needs to do better. /1
@sstrudeau@MayorTaylorA2 A few thoughts: The biggest thing that jumped out at me was in 5.2, which says "If the employee is unable to reply accurately, he/she will have the opportunity to review the appropriate written records before responding." /1