This is one of the biggest issues of some original pilots. A lot of young/first time writers have an idea they thing is cool as the ending, but in reality that should be the act one out. Example: I knew someone who wrote what seemed to be this weird Stepford Wife-y pilot. It… 1/
was weird and had a cool vibe (and to be clear, well written). The twist at the end was that it actually took place inside a simulation and these were computer programs for a Pleasantville-type world becoming sentient. Cool twist. But the way the plot in the pilot was laid… 2/
out, it didn’t actually tell the story that the pilot was promising at the end. Instead it was just vaguely creepy scenes with little momentum. That’s not to say original pilot should be plot plot plot, but I should have an idea of the story/theme you want to tell by page 10. 3/3
(The other big issue that’s harder to fix is that there isn’t actually a story or theme worth telling.)
Yeah the other thing to remember is what’s your goal with your original pilot. 99% of them are usually for some form of staffing/representation. If a showrunner/exec is (theoretically) reading 200-400 scripts, you need to get to the point.

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