For above-the-line creatives: writers, producers, directors. I was a dev exec at Lotus Ent, so this is my perspective as a buyer. What to do, what NOT to do, and how to nail it. #screenwriting#WritingCommunity
1/ All pros pitch. Even at the highest levels
2/ Pitching is really hard, so you need to practice, practice, practice. First off know that the cardinal sins of pitching are
a) too boring
b) too confusing
3/ The first thing you're often pitching is getting the buyer to read you. Whether that's a query, an email, or an in-the-room pitch, you have to fascinate them and compel them to read. If they send it out for coverage, you may be doomed, so ASK THEM TO READ THEMSELVES.
4/ If you're selling a comedy- know that you gotta make the buyer laugh IN THE ROOM, and so you should write those jokes ahead of time, plan, and also trust the moment- both equally. Your first job is to prove you (or the writer/s) are funny. PEN15 sold off a comedy short btw
5/ As a buyer, it's hard to interrupt you if we get lost. Questions start to add up... so make space to check in.
Are you with me so far? Is a question that can save your pitch. Take pauses. Do NOT ramble on and on and on. Let it breathe. Tell the story but check in too.
6/ If your story has 1000 characters, and you know them all SO WELL, I guarantee even your intelligent your buyer will glaze over. So give us the heart of it- your protag, your villain, the story engine. Be compelling. Bring the PASSION!! Perform it :)
7/ You should always have a one sentence pitch. As a producer, I got a read request today off a one sentence pitch that was designed just for this particular producer I was talking to. Once they say yes, STOP TALKING. End the meeting. Follow up fast.
8/ As a buyer, I knew within a few minutes of the pitch whether this movie was for us. A powerful entry after the small talk is to just say, listen I'm not sure if this is for everyone, but here's why I thought of YOU for it. Make it personal to them. Execs have egos :)
9/ Film your pitch twice:
First film it into your phone.
Then film yourself pitching a real person (manager, team, spouse etc). Then watch the playback and learn. Then adjust your pitch. Rinse. Repeat. Refine. That feedback is gold.
10/ On rejection. It's SO hard. Learn what you can. Improve for next time. If the person who passes says they love your work/writing/filmmaking, ask them who they know may be right for your project. Ask for that email intro (warm handoff).
11/ I teach pitching, and you can grab my free special report on How to Pitch Anything in 1min here EntertainmentBusinessLeague.com
12/ Succeeding in entertainment where even celebs are your competition is tough. If you want guidance navigating your career - only if you're serious- you can apply to the Entertainment Business School with me here- next class starts in Jan: EntertainmentBusinessSchool.com
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Thread: What writers should know from my job working as a development exec (we made Just Friends w/ Ryan Reynolds, Peaceful Warrior, the Good Night, Hachi a Dog’s Tale, Air I Breathe) #screenwriting#WritingCommunity
1/ There are 2 main pitching mistakes I saw as a buyer: too boring or too confusing. Pitches shouldn't be a monologue the whole time. Share your story, but check in with the room. Converse! Have fun talking :)
2/ If you write comedy you MUST be funny in the room during the pitch. Make 'em laugh. Or we won't think you're funny on the page. That's a big disconnect you can't afford. Write jokes into your pitch.
Thread for writers: So you placed in a contest, how do you query reps, producers, directors with your project? I was a buyer at Lotus Entertainment (prev Inferno), and this is what I can tell you re: #screenwriting:
1- If you have a great script, there are people who want it!
2- First make a list of producers from your comp shows/films, and go to IMDB to get their contact info. Make a list of your ideal reps that you are a fit for long term (not just this project). Make a list of indie directors you love. (These should be long lists.)
3- Now work on 2 things, your logline and your HOOK. A logline is NOT a mini-synopsis! It's what makes your project- to use manager @johnzaozirny 's million dollar word "undeniable". Your logline should be memorable and stunning, basically ON FIRE with undeniablity (Now the hook)
Unrepped writers, an advice thread from someone who was a buyer:
1- As my pal Scott Gardenhour says, “It’s better to have too many babies than a spoiled baby.” Write more. Submit more. Write so much you forget who is reading you and you need a spreadsheet to keep track
2- As a coach I counsel many creatives- many who have reps- and some reps don’t work very hard for their writers. The writers wait, and worry. No, not you. You never sit on your laurels because you are a networking QUEEN/KING/NONBINARY BADASS 👑
3- The one thing you can control in this insanely stressful business is: your attitude. What comes out of your mouth about others. I recently passed on producing a great writer’s project because that person badmouths people and I’m aware I would be next. Who needs that? Pass
Thread: What writers should know from my job working as a development exec (we made Just Friends, Peaceful Warrior, the Good Night, Hachi a Dog’s Tale)
1: There are 2 main pitching mistakes: you are confusing or boring. Pitches should not be a writer/producer/director monologue the whole time. Converse! Have fun talking.
2- if you write comedy you MUST be funny in the room during the pitch. Make em laugh. Or we won’t think you’re funny on the page.