Thread by @blackhatwizardd

Everybody writes cold emails wrong.

You either wrote it like an ad, you made it look spammy, or you made it too long.

Here's how you do it correctly.

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It has to be made abundantly clear to the recipient this was not an automated email.

Hence what we call the {{first line}}

I put it in brackets because you can automated it as a merge field.

A merge field means it directly draws it from a CSV file you upload

So you have a Google Sheet with columns

Name
Email
Company
First Line

"Hey {{name}}. {{First line}}"

Is the first sentence of the cold email

Now what do you write in the rest of the email?

One angle is a question.

"Hey {{name}}. {{First line}}

Quick question, do you need a commission only sales rep?"

"Hey {{name}}. {{First line}}

Quick question, do you need a database of ecommerce brands?"

"Hey {{name}}. {{First line}}

Quick question, have you tried Google Shopping ads?"

This works so hilariously well because it's short.

The longer the email the less probability it will be read in entirety.

YOU'RE NOT WRITING AN AD.

Now what about those first lines?

Annoying to make, right?

Or you can use quicklines.ai to write them for you

We've sent hundreds of thousands of cold emails. We know what works in first lines.

Those sentence structures are used in Quicklines.

"But they all look the same"

Yes that's the point. Because they work

Every other tool was designed by people who don't send cold emails

Your next logical question is "how do I get the emails?"

Read this thread

https://twitter.com/blackhatwizardd/status/1440796043046576136?s=20