Ok, I hope I am not overstepping, but here is some advice and tips that is particularly helpful to me and hopefully, it can be of help to others (plus, it's Friday and all my students are involved in group projects & don't need me at the moment!) #revpit#revpitwaiting
Today’s thread is about CREATING 3D CHARACTERS (and this is for MCs/Antagonists/sidekick characters too--basically anyone who features in your book ought to have some clear thought put into them and WHY they are there!) 1/14 #revpit
I read for many contests & there's often a reliance on explaining the personality of a character by describing their looks & their clothes. Authors can often SEE their characters so clearly that they want the reader to see as clearly--but it doesn't work 2/14 #revpit
Because we all know that our personalities are much more than what we look like on a given Tuesday. Those things can contribute to personality, but there are SO MANY better ways to create characters that feel like living, breathing humans (and that's the goal!) 3/14 #revpit
This is MY process--it might work for you, it might not. I'm going to give you the things I specifically visualize and think about when I jump into writing a new book. Try out and feel what works for your process 4/14 #revpit
I begin w/a new notebook and create pages for each MC (I write romance mostly, so there will be 2), but I also do this (usually slightly lesser extent) for each side character who will be taking up significant space on pages. 5/14 #revpit
Yes, I do want to have an idea of what they look like, and how they dress, because it *can* help show their personality, but it is not my first concern. I want to know the person wearing those clothes, and what makes them tick 6/14 #revpit
I first figure out what their emotional wound is--what has happened to them to define who they are in their own mind, and what lies do they believe about themselves as a result of that wound? This is VITAL because it sets the stage for the rest of the story. 7/14 #revpit
Next, I look into what personality traits do they have resulting from this wound? I want things that are positive AND negative (The Thesaurus series is exactly what you need for this--there is a positive/negative trait edition) I go for a good mix of both 8/14 #revpit
There are lots of great checklists/interview questions to ask about your characters, so look them up. I write historical, so they often don't work, so instead I think about what events are happening in their world, and how they feel about them 9/14 #revpit
I want you to know how your characters feel about their world and their place in it. For me, I want a mix of things they rail against as well as things that make them happy. Unrelenting hardship is hard to read, so give them something that is comforting! 10/14 #revpit
Now, it gets fun! I usually create a catchphrase for my MCs--something they say about once a chapter (don't go overboard!) In contemporary works, you don't want to rely TOO hard on trendy phrases because it gets stale QUICK (totes stale, ahem) 11/14 #revpit
How do they move? What do they do when they're nervous? Excited? Do they have habits they fall back on for self-soothing? 12/14 #revpit
How do they interact with their friends? What makes them laugh? Cry? What are their hobbies? Do they have any unique skills or traits? How do these help/hurt their journey? 13/14 #revpit
NOW--rubs hands gleefully--HOW do each of these contribute to the goals, motivation, and conflicts in their lives? Hope this helps you get your characters really well rounded! Add your tips in the thread! 14/14 #revpit
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I saw a #revpit question about when you know your MS is ripe to query.
It’s a common one because we’re all anxious for the chance at publishing.
Here’s a frank chat
1/12
Almost every writer I know has queried too early. The story wasn’t ready, but we didn’t know.
Mainly because we don’t know what we don’t know until we learn.
Most people don’t get lovely contest mentoring--so you just wing it
2/12
Usually, after contest mentees are chosen, pro editors might offer specials to other people who entered. These are not universal. They also take an extraordinary amount of effort, so editors are paid commensurately!
3/12
#ammteasers I had some questions about DEEP POV & CHARACTERS WHO LEAP OFF THE PAGE and I feel like y'all have a whoooole lot of confidence in me! 😂😂😘
I also think the two can go hand in hand—so buckle up for a thread!
1/14
#ammteasers Okey-doke! Sometimes, if you get the feedback that an agent/editor "didn't connect with the voice" it *can* mean other things, BUT it often signals that your writer's voice overpowered the narrative, rather than the reader immersing themselves in you MCs POV
2/14
Well, deep POV bridges the distance between the MC and the reader and bypasses the more neutral voice of the writer. It makes your MC come alive to a reader, and that brings their journey/arc closer on many levels.
3/14
#ammteasers All right hopefuls! I've got some notes to thread on some of your craft questions, and it might turn into one long one, or might need to be split up.
Let's talk STAKES or *what happens if your MC doesn't rise to the challenge you're presenting them with?*
1/15
#ammteasers Sometimes the stakes in a book are clear: "If MC doesn't accomplish X--the world will be destroyed" (or some variation of that theme).
And that's all well and good for some genres, but it is too unwieldy for most stories, so you've got to get micro!
2/15
#ammteasers Whether you pants or plot, you're going to have to weave this stuff into the opening of the book...lay the groundwork so that when your plucky MC finds out what's happening, we're vested in how they're going to tackle this.
3/15
Reading the horrors of #RWA, I’ve done my best to keep my mouth shut and just learn. Because I am a writer coming from a place of privilege, I didn’t think I had the right to add more fuel to the fire
But the fact is, even though I am white & able-bodied, I am bi, neurodiverse and write characters like me in #LGBTQ historical romance, and this problem of hatred toward “other” isn’t just at the national level
I joined #RWA 2 years ago so I could enter contests and help kickstart my career. In the 14 months I contest-ed, I entered 18 and won or finaled 14 times. In 1 contest, I was the over-all winner & “won” a mentorship (more later)