@MrBeast famously stated he spends up to $10,000 just on thumbnail design + testing. "The thumbnail makes the difference between 50 million views and 200 million."
For the new video? He makes YouTube face next to a gold yacht. Very clickable. 1/
@MrBeast shows yachts at different price points in the video, but you need a concise, catchy hook to pull views, so he only lists 2 yachts in the title.
"vs" language is a great emotional motivator, plus who doesn't wanna see a $1 yacht and a $1 billion yacht? 2/
He doesn't introduce himself or give a long-winded preamble. The instant the video begins, he yells "this is a 1 billion dollar super yacht," with a drone camera zooming out + graphics to make the yacht look gold. You're immediately in the video. 3/
In just 7 seconds, @MrBeast gives us an extremely quick preview of the $1 billion yacht—enough to make us go wow and wanna wait around to see the big payoff. 4/
@MrBeast 0:09-0:17—the 2nd hook + transition into content
The 1st hook makes you wanna see the $1 billion yacht, but the 14 minute video builds up to it. So, this second hook frames more "vs" content for audiences to evaluate different yachts by teasing them all up front. 5/
The title promised a $1 yacht, which is certainly a headscratcher. We get to that $1 yacht just 17 seconds into the video. @MrBeast immediate addresses the important question: why is it $1?
And uh... you can see why. 6/
@MrBeast Throughout video—on-screen progress tracker
Look at the upper left corner of this screenshot from the video. See the little yacht and the $1 sign? That helps remind the audience where they're at in the video + how to compare the various yachts. 7/
@MrBeast While you're here, hello! I'm Jack Appleby.
I write social strategy🧵 breakdowns every weekday, teaching you how the best brands + creators make amazing content.
I'd love if you followed @jappleby + retweeted the thread. I'm a full-time writer, so every follower counts! 8/
Huuuuge font, big black stroke + shadow, and used to make shots without a ton of action more dynamic. It's there for accessibility AND to make a big point. 9/
The $1 yacht story lasted 58 seconds, and as a completed story, could've caused viewers to bounce. That's why at :056, @MrBeast reintroduces the premise with "later in this video we have" with the same 6-second breakdown as before, listing the yachts. 10/
"This is the $1 million yacht which is a little smaller than I thought it would be" immediately sets us audiences to judge this yacht for size, paid off by Jimmy ducking later in the story. The up-front opinion gives audience context to watch for. 11/
As Jimmy describes the yacht, graphics are added to contextualize the area he's talking about, like the living room. Not just helpful for context, but adds yet another visual element to the video. 12/
Now 90 seconds into the video, we start to get a lottt more of Jimmy + his friends (partly because the yachts are getting bigger with more to explore). The audience's parasocial relationship with these people is a strong reason many keep coming back. 13/
When the video moves from yacht to yacht, err, story to story, these huge transition "cards" come up to introduce the next boat, err, character. You really can't underestimate the value in step-by-step storytelling. 14/
@MrBeast 2:35—story transition contextualizing the whole video
As we go to the next yacht, we zoom back out to see the full fleet again, reminding us what we've seen and what's to come. It's one of many "stay tuned" moves in the video. 15/
The $25 million yacht is huge, so Jimmy introduces even more of his friends to explore. We'll follow them all around as they search every room of the ship. 16/
He wants to show us the boat, but it's a big boat and there's more boats to see, so timelapses are used to get from room to room more quickly, only stopping for interesting things (like an amazing bedroom) 18/
It can't JUST be boat tours for 14 minutes! So now they're riding jetskis and trying to catch pizza thrown off the boat. And it's fun! And silly! And keeps you engaged! 20/
@MrBeast is enough of a celeb as is—guy's the #1 YouTuber. But hey, bring in Pete Davidson at about the 1/2 mark as a surprise character in the story—easy win + promo opps for new viewers. 21/
Nolan overslept! And he hasn't been in the video so far! Because he apparently overslept call time. So now we have a background story that'll—you guessed it—keep us engaged & allow change ups in the video, like a movie. 22/
Jimmy asks his friends if they'd rather have 300 $1 million ships or one $300 million dollar ship, then points to the camera and asks the audience. Great way to give fans a reason to debate in the comments. 23/
Because Pete wasn't enough, now we've got Brady. You know how this works—big celeb, now we follow him through the tour of the boat. Of course you wanna see that, he's a huge deal. 24/
A big hook for @MrBeast's videos—fans and everyday humans are almost always involved. By bringing 400 subscribers onto the boat, YOU want to become a subscriber for that chance to participate in a video. 26/
Not only did 400 people get to visit the yacht—@MrBeast also gave every single one of them a 3-night stay on a cruise. Yet another reason to subscribe + watch the next video 27/
That's just the tip of the iceberg. I kept it to storytelling, hook, & retention tactics, but there's so much you can dig into here, like his Feastables promotions, gated content for purchases, and more.
Thanks for reading, y'all!
The most common replies:
- "it worked because he's Mr.Beast"
- "easy with money"
- "this doesn't work for beginners"
Suit yourself! I believe anyone can use these at any budget to make better content. You might not go viral, but clicks + retention will absolutely improve! 29/
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It's my 36th birthday, so by the laws of Twitter, I get to offer 36 pieces of advice.
Here's a bunch of weird ones no one will tell ya. 🧵
1. Swipe left when you see your co-workers on a dating app.
2. Don’t try to get creative validation through creative jobs.
If you tie your creative self-worth to projects that require client approval, you’re gonna have a bad time. Always have a creative hobby that’s just for you.
3. Don’t be the main character at the company Christmas party.
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I can show the deck because, amazingly, they bought the exact idea. No changes. That almost NEVER happens. The case study: shortyawards.com/15th/the-first…
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Did you set New Year's Resolutions for work? Because you should. 2023's a great year to get intentional about your career, set trackable goals (that you'll actually enjoy), and take a leap.
Here are 30 ideas for work-related 2023 goals 🧵:
1. Apply to 1 new job a month, even if you aren't looking.
Don't wait til you need a new job to look, even if you love what you're doing. You don't owe your company anything. If dream jobs pop up, go for them.
2. Set a caffeine limit + last chance to grab coffee each day.
I can't confirm or deny I'm a 2 energy drink a day guy who's trying to cut back.