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30 Mar, 11 tweets, 5 min read
A quick drawing lesson for artists who struggle with street scenes/buildings-

I was giving feedback on a student layout and realized the advice here could help other people too.

Here's the construction build.
The perspective is consistent, which is a great first step.
The perspective is working, but there's a common proportion problem.

To check and adjust, we need to find the eye line used to build the scene. Follow back the perspective lines and there it is. Straight forward.
From here I add a scale figure. Sometimes I'll draw one in, but when I'm doing a lot of critiques I use an architectural figure silhouette like this instead.

I size the figure to fit on the bench and will use that to measure everything else in the scene. So far so good.
If a part of the scale figure crosses the eye line, that will be consistent everywhere they stand on the same ground plane at every distance.

In this case they're below the eye line, but the distance will scales proportionately. Easy to check with copy + paste in digital.
So, shifting the figure over slightly and scaling them, the size of the doorway is a bit big, but there are big doors/doorways on the front of some buildings so it works.

The bike is a touch too large for a 100% realistic scene, but that's easily scale-able too. No big deal.
Here's where it gets interesting-

Imagine the building is transparent. There are walls, a floor and a ceiling on the main floor. The ceiling might be a bit taller or a bit shorter, but between those floors are support beams and load-bearing materials.
The size of the figure at that position remains constant, so if I slide a copy of them vertical up, you can see that the second floor window is at pelvis level.

The second floor is too short.
Based on our rough floor build, the window should be somewhere around here and the roof should be raised to match.

In this way, they could build more floors or check all the buildings down the street for proportion relative to each other. Digital makes that process a lot easier.
I see this all the time with street scene drawings. People remember to check the relative size at street level, but after that each floor just becomes a series of random stacked windows that aren't properly spaced out and look really weird.
Even if you're drawing a scene that's more cartoony, it's still helpful to think in terms of relative proportion and to establish an overall sense of scale, even if it's exaggerated.
.@Thomasintokyo shows off this same basic theory masterfully in these tutorial examples-

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30 Mar
My 'career' in TTRPGs has been strange and I came into it sideways via illustration and comics.
While working in animation I started doing some freelance illustration for indy RPGs.

Soon after, I joined the Udon studio and started doing illustrations for Dungeon Magazine (when it was at Paizo), Exalted and a bunch of other RPG books.
That led to networking at conventions like Origins and Gen Con, which turned into more art gigs for RPGs.

Udon wanted to expand their comic publishing and we had a great relationship with White Wolf, so that turned into developing and co-writing an Exalted comic mini-series.
Read 15 tweets
2 Feb
SURPRISE, I have a digital release today from @DCComics!!

LET THEM LIVE: Unpublished Tales From The DC Vault #1 finally unveils a SUICIDE SQUAD done-in-one issue I wrote back in 2011!

Line Art Tradd Moore
Colors @therealsobreiro
Letters @blambot

comicsbeat.com/dc-universe-in…
Huge thanks to @katiekubert and @mariejavins for helping Ambush Bug steal this story from the vaults so everyone can finally read it.

It's my first DC Comics release in 7 years, and I hope there's more to come in the months ahead. :)
I had so much fun working on this that I bought Tradd's original art for the splash page with Harley and Deadshot when he drew the story in 2016.

It's been framed and on my wall for years, but I haven't been able to show it until now.
Read 8 tweets
31 Jan
In the same vein as @BizzareComics DC 10 Title challenge, if I had to pare down the Marvel publishing line to only 10 series per month, here are the iconics- Image
1) SPIDER-MAN - with back-up stories of Spidey-related characters

2) THE AVENGERS - big cast and big threats

3) FANTASTIC FOUR - with cosmic-related back-up stories

4) X-MEN - includes a Wolverine back-up and one other back-up story each issue
5) CHAMPIONS - Teenage heroes, with other teen hero back-up stories

6) JOURNEY INTO MYSTERY - Thor, with magic/supernatural back-up stories

7) TALES TO ASTONISH - Captain America + Iron Man

8) MARVEL KNIGHTS - Black Widow, Daredevil and other espionage /street-level heroes
Read 5 tweets
31 Jan
1) ACTION COMICS - Superman, with rotating back-up stories of related characters.

2) DETECTIVE COMICS - Batman, with rotating back-up stories of related characters.

3) SENSATION COMICS - Wonder Woman, with rotating back-up stories of related characters.
4) JUSTICE LEAGUE UNLIMITED - Big cast, epic stakes

5) THE GREEN LANTERN CORPS. - Cosmic adventures

6) TEEN TITANS - Teen heroes
7) BRAVE and the BOLD - Paired hero team-ups like Booster Gold & Blue Beetle, Green Arrow & Black Canary, etc.

8) GOTHAM - Lead villain story and rotating back-ups

9) ELSEWORLDS - Anthology series

10) DC Comics Showcase - Anthology series
Read 11 tweets
28 Jan
All words to the Evangelion opening theme replaced by cat meow in official remake by Yoko Takahashi, the original singer...
Here's the official youtube link:
I'm just excited that I'll have a version of this song I can properly sing at karaoke!
Read 4 tweets
26 Jan
A former student of mine reached out wanting to know how they might be able to pivot from working in animation to making comics.

I sent them a response and figured the advice might be useful to other people online as well-

#makecomics #ComicsSchool Image
I don't know if this will turn into a new career or is a daydreaming/"grass is greener over there" situation.

Either way, the same advice-

Set deadlines and build a thing.
Finish it, learn from it and then, if you're still engaged, make more.

It's that easy and that hard.
We all want to make our first attempt at something a soaring success. Doing research and getting advice before you start is a natural part of that.

But, in the end, you still have to make the thing for yourself and learn from that process.
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