There are few good suggestions in the replies but also quite some incorrect advice (unintentional).
But the problem, as with most things on the internet, which are the good ones? Few good rules to keep in mind while sorting through pitch deck advice...
Stay away from this kind of advice
a) "very simple, use this 10 slide template & your pitch is done" - a template doesn't capture your story. It's also very tempting since it allows you to skip the hard process of asking yourself hard questions while making the deck
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b) stay away from "just outsource it to a content writer or designer". At early stages like seed, best if founder themselves work on the pitch - they are only ones with all the info and vision in their head (maybe not articulated yet but it's in there)
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The good suggestions are those that tell you to "understand the investor mindset - what they are looking for at seed stage and develop a story".
Story is not just about the flow of points but also positioning or framing....
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...Like you have brand positioning, your deck needs to do investor positioning. Make the investors understand your company in a certain you want.
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For eg
In a seed deck, primarily you have to convince someone of the problem & opportunity you are going after, that the solution you've created seems to working fine at the moment, & the team you have put together has the skills or personality to build/scale this solution.
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And then you show them few plans you have for the future (it could be new revenue line, new products or just scaling current offering further) and say that's why you need x amount of money - to do what plans you have laid out for in the future.
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You will end up covering all the points mentioned in a template (problem, traction, team, etc) but they will be weaved into your story
Look for suggestions around these themes. That will help you narrow down on quality advice.
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PS: I haven't gotten into details of building a good story/deck. Aim was to give you a compass to identify good advice while looking through tons of pitch deck advice on the internet (it's a topic that unfortunately, like medicine, has a lot of incorrect advice on the web)
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A little-known OTT app that is only 10 months old and with content only in one language has raked up 5M+ downloads on Play Store with a rating of 4.5 (1.9 lakh ratings).
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AHA is an OTT service officially launched in March 2020 (soft launch in Jan 2020) with only Telugu web-series and movies. What's interesting though it is not a venture by a millennial aged tech or media hipster.
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It is owned by Geetha Arts whose owner in turn is Allu Arvind - a leading producer in Tollywood cinema (Telugu film industry) since last few decades.
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Strive to remove as much unnecessary detail as possible. Outside eyes help. Whatever remains, make copy crisp/make it visual. As a founder, easy to get into mode of thinking every point is imp.
PS: It takes time & iterarions. Don't start working on a pitch a week before a meeting
But this step 2. Step 1 is to spend time & get feedback on the articulation of the company (2-3 lines that describe what you do). Through what lens you want someone to look at the biz. In what Bucket they slot you. Lot of this is decided by end vision, competition and sector.
My fav example is how Dunzo changed its articulation from personal concierge service to enabling local commerce.
As personal concierge articulation l, your only rev source is customer. As local commerce, merchant gets added in.
Was looking at copywriting examples and ended up visiting login pages of a few sites we rarely visit anymore since auto-login.
For most, the copy is simple and to the point (how it should be). They tell you what's in it for you and that's it. No cute stuff.
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Facebook - Facebook helps you connect and share with the people in your life
Answers the Q in your mind about what you can do with FB. They obvi do a lot more but they stick to their essence (connecting & sharing) without complicating matters (like they did with the product)
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Whatsapp
Simple. Secure. Reliable messaging.
Looks like the stress is more on 'we are about trust' than 'we are about messaging' (with the words 'secure' and 'reliable')
A thread of startups attempting to do some really outlandish stuff - rethinking solutions ground-up or challenging industries/ideas that haven't changed for decades.
Thinking of calling them 'Musk-Type Startups' (better name suggestions welcome)
Examples...
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Spinlaunch (spinlaunch.com), USA
Their thesis is that rockets are an inefficient way to send things into space (burning fuel, high cost etc). Using centrifugal force is a better way. So spin stuff at a fast enough pace to reach escape velocity & launch into space
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Boom (boomsupersonic.com), USA
Air travel hasn't seen major innovation (regards to speed) in decades. Boom wants to bring supersonic flight to civil aviation. Few of the longest routes in the world will be cut short by ~50% with Boom (LA - Sydney from 14:30h to 8h)
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1/ Why are tech giants (FB/Amazon/Google/MS) buying stakes in Indian telecom?
Thread...
Few initial thoughts from bouncing off ideas with @manchandarohit
2/ It's essentially a distribution ploy. But all these giants are demand aggregators (barring MS) who already own customers. So why?
3/ It's not for you and me but to get access to the new internet customer. And no prizes for guessing which country is expected to add the highest # of NEW internet users in the next few years.
Used to track oil prices everyday while at Goldman Sachs (way back in 2016-17). Will use some of the gyaan I picked up to explain why crude oil prices fell below $0 yesterday in simple terms and also cover few other points around crude prices
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First, oil prices didn't fall below $0 globally. It happened only in US. Although it might touch zero globally based on few factors I will explain later
There are 2 indices that are used as benchmarks to price oil worldwide - WTI and Brent.
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WTI is used to price oil extracted in US. And Brent is used for oil extracted in Europe, Middle East and Africa - hence making it more global (Brent dictates oil prices for ~2/3rds of global oil supply)
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