Putting together a post comparing the original opening of Legend of the Condor Heroes with the revised version, and have noticed even more mistranslations and cut passages in the official translation. =\
#wuxia #武俠 #JinYong #金庸
#wuxia #武俠 #JinYong #金庸
江畔一排數十株烏柏樹，葉子似火燒般紅
"Ten cypresses stand proudly along its banks, their leaves red like fire."
A cypress with fire-red leaves?!?! No. It's a Chinese tallow tree (Triadica sebifera). Also should be "tens" or "dozens", not exactly "ten". Simple errors like this.
"Ten cypresses stand proudly along its banks, their leaves red like fire."
A cypress with fire-red leaves?!?! No. It's a Chinese tallow tree (Triadica sebifera). Also should be "tens" or "dozens", not exactly "ten". Simple errors like this.
一件青布長袍早洗得褪成了藍灰
"in robes once black, now faded a blue-grey"
Black robe became blue-grey? it's bcuz 青 is blue, not black. It's right there in your own translation! Even in 青絲 referring to black hair, it's the blue glint or tint of light off of black hair.
"in robes once black, now faded a blue-grey"
Black robe became blue-grey? it's bcuz 青 is blue, not black. It's right there in your own translation! Even in 青絲 referring to black hair, it's the blue glint or tint of light off of black hair.
This post will really show why revising is so necessary to improve one's writing. The original opening is a dull infodump history lesson, while the revised version weaves the material in more naturally through the voice of an oral storyteller.
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