As an academic writing coach, here are the 7 mistakes I see supervisors and PIs make in the process of co-writing a paper with their PhD students or mentees.
#1 Not teaching your students the steps that are part of the process to write a paper
🙆 The main reason novice writers procrastinate on that task to write a paper is that they don’t know how to get started and break this huge and overwhelming project into manageable chunks.
#2: Only editing the grammar, punctuation and syntax of your students’ work
📋 First drafts usually benefit the most from structural comments to make sure the paper tells a single and compelling story. Do that before you spend hours on moving commas.
#3: Telling your students that they should tell a story in their paper without defining what that is
🎬 I see this alllll the time. “Story” means everything and nothing if you don’t specify which exact elements the paper needs to include to tell said story.
#4: Not setting internal deadlines throughout the writing process
📆 You may think that enforcing deadlines comes across as pushy but a clear timeline helps everyone! Do include your mentee in the process of creating the timeline.
#5: Not explaining what you didn’t like about their writing
💬 Whenever you revise your mentees’ writing, provide reasons for your edits. If writing the comments takes too much time, record a video walking your student through your edits.
#6: Having your student write a complete draft before you discuss what the story and flow of your paper will be
📝 It’s is demoralising for anyone to get a draft completely ripped apart. It’s also a waste of time. Give feedback throughout the writing process instead!
#7: Thinking reading the literature will teach your students writing
👩🏫 Most students don’t know what good and bad writing looks like and “the literature” contains both. Provide your mentees with quality writing training instead -- whether facilitated by you or someone else.
Bonus #8: Not checking in with your student about what they may need
👩🎓 Everyone has a different working style so while it’s your job to guide your mentee through the process of writing a paper, do check in with them about what kind of help would be most beneficial to them.
TL;DR: 8 mistakes PIs make in the co-writing process (1/2)
#1 Not teaching the steps of the process to write a paper
#2 Only editing the language, not the structure
#3 Not defining what a story is
#4 Not setting internal deadlines
TL;DR: 8 mistakes PIs make in the co-writing process (2/2)
#5 Not providing reasons for your edits
#6 Having your student write a complete draft first thing
#7 Thinking reading the literature teaches writing
#8 Not checking in with your student about what they may need
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Ever got told to "tell a story" in your article? Including an element of tension is how you do it!
✅ Clearly describe the problem that your study is solving
#2: Ignoring the broader perspective
It's easy to get bogged down in details when you're writing your paper, but it won't be obvious to your reader how your research relates to the field and society if you don't spell it out.
✅ Explain the broader implications of your research
😱 In 1 sentence, hook your reader describing a problem in your field that your research is contributing to solving. Every reader of the journal should understand this sentence.
#2 Provide context needed to understand your study
🌳 In 1-3 sentences, give the reader any background they need to understand the motivation of your study. Clearly state the specific problem that your study solves.
💬 Split up figures if you are finding yourself communicating two or more key take-aways per figure (panel).
Step 2: Pick the most suitable plot type
📊 Whether you choose a bar chart, scatter plot, line, heat map or histogram depends on what conveys your message in the simplest and most accurate way.