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Summary:

1: Use stories and analogies
2: More periods
3: Formatting matters
4: Spell & grammar check
5: Write the same paragraph multiple times
6: Cut, cut, cut
7: Use 5th-grade language
8: Avoid acronyms
9: Read your sentences out loud
10: Use visuals, graphs, and charts

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