The number one MISTAKE Gumroad creators are guilty of…

Which could double their sales when fixed…

And it’s…
Drums…

The first button on their sales page.
Lemme tell you why.

>>> A Thread 🧵 <<<
Here are some numbers for you.

I am running cold traffic from FB ads.

Our checkout page conversion rate over all funnels is 40-60%.

People on Twitter posting their conversion rates being 2-10%.

How is that possible?!

Good question.
Get this:
Having a button at the top of your page is almost like having an exit button there.

Pretty much same numbers.

But why do I say that?
In order to understand…

We need to understand this…
Good sales pages have only two options.

Option 1: Buy.
Option 2: Die.

Sorry for being dramatic.
But that’s all.

Either you buy or you leave the page.

That’s why you never see menus on sales pages…

(Except for SaaS and B2B but that’s a topic for another thread)…

So…
Imagine this:

A person clicks on a link.
Lands on a sales page.
It has an awesome hook…

He delightfully reads every single word on the page.

But there’s one problem with sales pages:

The reading on them is PASSIVE.
Meaning?
Our built-in impatience (ADHD for some?) wants to do more than reading.

Want a good example?
Make your button swing. Or move in any way. You’ll see hundreds of %s increase of people clicking.

It draws their attention -> they click.

But…
The same happens when a button is not moving.

It drives attention.

And is almost irresistible to click.

Especially…
If there’s curiosity behind the button.

For example?
If price is not written near it (or on it)…

Want another example?
If you don’t explain what happens after a person clicks on the button.

They just wanna click it.
It’s irresistible to them.

But what’s the problem with that? Why is it a conversion-killing mistake?

Well..
It’s simple…
The reason you have copy on a sales page…

The reason a copywriter gets paid up to $50,000 (yes that’s a real number) for ONE sales page…

Is for it to be read.

Copy works.
Copy convinces.
Copy sells.

So if a person clicks on a button on the top of the page…
You didn’t get a chance to convince him.

Or to sell to him.

But it gets worse…

Not only that he understood right off the bat that you’re selling…

He also got the price BEFORE he got the value.

Listen. It’s this simple. Answer this:
I’m building a copywriting course for you to buy.

It’ll cost $497.

Do you buy?

If you answered no…
You’re sane. Good.

If you answered yes…
Please DM me 😅

Just kidding.
But you get the idea…

And now let’s try this…
What if…
In my $497 course…
I would guarantee a client who pays you $1,000…

On me. Included in the course.

Would you buy now?
Maybe?
That’s because I had the chance to convince you. To sweeten the deal.

But…
If you clicked on the top button…
I wouldn’t have the chance to do so.

See what I mean?

So here’s how the flow works:

A person lands on the page.
Sees a button.
Clicks it.
Gets to a checkout page.
Leaves.

How’s that different than just leaving the page?
Now.
You may argue…

“But if it’s warm traffic?”

Good question.

If it’s warm traffic… and they’re looking to buy…

They’ll find your god damn button if it’s somewhere in the middle or bottom of page!

But…
It’s your job to make it easy to find.

Make it big.
Different colour than everything else on the page.
Make it move if you can.

And please.
Please…
Let’s help creators.
We’re not in a competition here.

There’s enough for everyone.

RT this for them to see and make more money.

They deserve it.

• • •

Missing some Tweet in this thread? You can try to force a refresh
 

Keep Current with George Ten

George Ten Profile picture

Stay in touch and get notified when new unrolls are available from this author!

Read all threads

This Thread may be Removed Anytime!

PDF

Twitter may remove this content at anytime! Save it as PDF for later use!

Try unrolling a thread yourself!

how to unroll video
  1. Follow @ThreadReaderApp to mention us!

  2. From a Twitter thread mention us with a keyword "unroll"
@threadreaderapp unroll

Practice here first or read more on our help page!

More from @GrammarHippy

16 Sep
Copywriting gurus are lying to you.

They say “use benefits not features”.

They are WRONG.
And because of their dusty by-the-book-techniques…

Your conversion rates suffer.

>>> A Thread 🧵 <<
This is not a click bait.
I mean it.

They’re wrong.
Let me explain why.
But before…

Let’s understand what features are…

And what benefits are…

Simply put:
Features

A list of things that are part of your product or service.

For example:

My service is copywriting.

Features:

• I write quickly
• I write persuasively
• I know how to do research

Those are benefits.
And…
Read 13 tweets
13 Sep
How to sell air (information) on Twitter using copywriting...

>>> A Thread 🧵 <<<
There are many elements to selling online.

- Scarcity
- Proof
- Testimonials
- Hooks
- Stories

And a lot of others.

But there's one nobody is talking about...

And if you're not able to sell...
It's most likely this one is missing:
And it's "value".

“vALuE?” You say with disgust. “That’s NOT my problem.”

I know. I know.
But…

When you’re selling air… erm… I mean… “information”…

A person can get the same information on YouTube for free - generally speaking. Right?

So…
Read 9 tweets
9 Sep
If you have less than 1,000 followers…

And you’re spending your time writing tweets and threads…

You’re doing it wrong.

How I grew 35-60 followers per day when I had less than 1,000 followers:

Almost without tweeting.

>> A thread 🧵 <<
Big account grow simply by getting engagement on their tweets.

Engagement shows their tweets to more people.

They engage.
Go into the Twitter profile - and follow.

Their friends see it. They engage. And visit the profile - snowball.

You can’t do that.
Your tweets below 1,000 followers get very low engagement.
If at all.

So how do you grow?
You use the engagement of big accounts.

Here’s how you do it (and how I did it):
Read 17 tweets
26 Aug
How to cast a witch-like spell on your readers...

that would FORCE them to read EVERYTHING?

A master thread 🧵
I've built several sales pages that made 6 figures.
The secret sauce?

The reader reads the first sentence..
then "wakes up" from the trance only after purchasing.

There are many techniques to that.
But if to sum it up?

curiosity + remove friction + transitions = trance
Make the copy easy to check out

If you don't space your sentences and paragraphs correctly?

Your text will look like it's a difficult read.
And if a reader wouldn't wanna check it out?

He wouldn't read it either.

You lost.
He's back to playing pokemon.
Read 20 tweets
26 Aug
Marketers are like drug-dealers.

We use chemicals in our reader’s minds to get them addicted…

There are 4 chemicals.
And if you learn how to use them…

Tell your competitors to start praying.

[A THREAD]
Dopamine - the chemical of distraction.

“I gotta go clean the dishes”…

“Oh, Facebook.”

Look for a person’s current addictions. Specifically, what is their chosen method of distraction?

HINT: It’s usually content.
Oxytocin - the chemical of connection

Where does your audience get their hits of oxytocin?

Do they watch Tony Robbins? If so - talk about him in your marketing.

Who and what are they connected to?
Read 7 tweets
25 Aug
Ads that made $10,000,000?

Are at your fingertips
Here’s how to find them

// A Thread \\
Go to swiped.co for a library of legendary ads.

It’s free.

You can also find emails there.
Go to FB ad library.

facebook.com/ads/library/

You can find any brand or advertiser and see ALL their ads.

Note how long an ad has been running. The longer - the better it’s performing.
Read 6 tweets

Did Thread Reader help you today?

Support us! We are indie developers!


This site is made by just two indie developers on a laptop doing marketing, support and development! Read more about the story.

Become a Premium Member ($3/month or $30/year) and get exclusive features!

Become Premium

Too expensive? Make a small donation by buying us coffee ($5) or help with server cost ($10)

Donate via Paypal Become our Patreon

Thank you for your support!

Follow Us on Twitter!

:(