Copywriting is nice.

But do you want copywriting on steroids?

If you do…
Forget everything you know about copywriting.

And focus on ONE thing:

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Let me throw you straight into deep water with an example.

I’ll show you how to DELETE copywriting from the equation…

And generate better copy than most copywriters.

Big promise?
Let’s see.

Scenario: you’re writing for a Facebook ads agency.

What would you write? 👇
If you’re a newbie you’d write something like this:

“Get the best Facebook ads agency. We write ads that make you sell out”.

You might even smile to yourself thinking “I nailed it!” If you’re completely new.

But reality will soon hit you on your head and you will understand:
This won’t work.

So you go and read some copywriting books…

Ask around on Twitter…

And you come up with a GENIUS idea!

“I should niche down”.

So you write:
“Get the best e-Commerce FB ads agency! We make your supplier better you to lower your volume”.

BOOM! Right?
Nope…
Still doesn’t work.
You got one lead. Nice start. But…

You haven’t hit the jackpot.

How do I know?
Because there’s a SWEET SPOT for any product or service in the world…

One that would sell your product like hot buns outside of a nightclub at 3 AM.

So how do you do that?
You understand your audience.

“fRiCK you George!!! Again with this market research crap????”

I know. I know… hear me out.

In order to sell big you need a competitive advantage.

One that your competitors do not have.

And here’s the only way to know what it is:
You need to KNOW your audience.

So here’s the practical part:

How do you get the FB agency owner CRY at nights because he can’t fulfill all their new clients?

Simple.
Understand what he’s selling and what your audience wants.

Frame it correctly.

And viola!
You’ll win.
Here’s a specific example.

Let’s imagine that there are two ways Fb ads agencies do the advertising for brands:

1. Directly to a sales page using conversion optimization.

2. Using a Top-Middle-Bottom of funnel ads (meaning: a funnel inside FB to warm up customers).

Now…
Choose one of those as your flagship method and “throw rocks at the other one”.

Let me show you two examples.

If you’re doing the “straight to a sales page” method - understand the disadvantages of the other method.

What are the disadvantages of the funnel inside FB?
It’s a bigger risk.
No immediate result.
You know if it worked after you spent a lot of money.

Etc.

So…
How do you throw rocks at the other method?

Let me show you a potential ad you’d run.
It goes like this:
Is your FB ads agency “warming up” clients before selling to them?

It’s not working as well as you expected it would. Right?

That’s because they’re targeting NON BUYERS.

Obviously it’s not working.

Instead…
Why not target buyers directly and get a sale immediately?

-End
If you’re selling the “warming up method” - you do exactly the same but to the other direction.

What are the disadvantages of straight sales page strategy?

Lower conversion rates.
Hitting a small market.

Etc.

So your ad would like like this:
Is your FB ads agency running traffic straight to a sales page?

It’s working.
Right…?

Or isn’t it?

They’re targeting only the 5% of the market. The low hanging fruit.

But what if you want to target 100% of the market and scale BIG?

-End.
You got the idea right?

Now… you could spice it up even more.

What other pain points does your audience have?
You have to know that!

Here’s one for you: agencies are very slow at delivering.

So…
You could take any one of the ads I wrote above and do this:
Add to the ad a promise.
“Set-up within 3 days or we charge you nothing”.

Sweetens up the deal right?

How about this:
A lot of brand owners don’t like set-up fees that agencies charge.

Why not add “no set-up fees” to your copy?

Now…
Do you understand this has NOTHING to do with copywriting but everything to do with knowing your audience?

Knowing their problems.
Pain points.
Current solutions they’re using.
Etc.

Makes sense?

But there’s more.
What if you understood everything that’s written in this thread…

PLUS you knew how to write it persuasively?

Like I said. Copywriting on steroids.

So if you want to get better at copywriting follow me @GrammarHippy.

I tweet loads about advanced copywriting techniques.
Also make sure to help others win more.

Retweet the first tweet 👇

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The ONLY way anyone can make predictable money online (and on Twitter):

I’ve gotten more than 50 DMs…
All asking me one thing:

“How do I make money?”

And instead of answering privately.. I decided to share this with everyone:

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Let me be brutally honest.
There are MANY ways you could go about.

But there’s only ONE way if you’re just starting out and want PREDICTABLE money.

And there’s no going around it.
It’s non-negotiable.

Here’s the ONE way:
Learn a high-income skill.

Let me explain why:
You could do surveys.
Or affiliate marketing.
Or a million other things.

But they’re not predictable.
Not consistent.
And honestly?

Not a lot of money.

That’s just the truth.
And you know it better than me if you’ve tried it yourself…

So now there’s only one question…
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Pablo Picasso’s net worth was 3.75 Billion francs in 1976.

That’s Four Billion in US Dollars.

But no money in the world could prepare him for Bianca.

An old lady…
Who met him in the mall.

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Bianca just got out of a retail store with two huge bags in her hands.

Shaking her body from side to side…

Trying to walk with bags almost as big as she was small.

Until she saw a familiar face.
She looked again.
And she couldn’t believe her eyes…
It was Picasso.

In the mall!

“Oh My God” - the lady thought in her head while running towards him.

She caught up.
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He stopped.
Looked back at her.
And with a huge smile he said:
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Money Twitter presented a NEW opportunity for copywriters to make $5-10k/mo.

Which ANYONE can easily use…

Here’s a predictable method to grow from a beginner to an expert copywriter…

While earning…
And working part-time.

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Before I tell you how to do it…
Here’s one thing NOT to do:

Do not write copy that is selling something.

Not ads.
And definitely not long-form sales pages…

Why?
Because you’re just not good enough for it to work.

So you’ll just fail and ruin your name.

So what do you do?
You start with ghost-tweeting.

It’s ghostwriting…
But for Twitter.

And here’s why it’s so crazy good:

There are many wealthy people who want to grow their Twitter but don’t want to be hands-on.

More than that…

You’ll become better and better…
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Would you like to take a sneak peak behind the curtain…

Of marketing for a startup that raised millions?

Step-by-step…
Done by me?

Here’s how 👇
I am starting to work with a startup.

Now…
You might know…

I HATE CLIENTS!

I haven’t touched a single thing for clients for 2 or so years now.

Not even consultation.
Not one ad.
Not one call.

So why did I start working with them?
They reached out to me almost six months ago.

I said no.
And no again.
And again.

But their VP is a good friend of my previous mentor.

So after he asked me to help them… I decided to try.

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How to stop your affiliate marketing from being MURDERED!

Exposing the truth behind the lies you’ve heard from your gurus.

They won’t like this 👇

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This thread will hurt some people.
I’m fine with that.

Because newbies are being exploited. And I don’t like that.

So in this thread I’ll tell you:
• The pros of affiliate marketing
• The cons
• The exploits
• The pitfalls
• How to do it right

Let’s begin 👇
Affiliate marketing is like the hot lady standing alone in the club.

It seems like she’s easy prey…
But she might be standing there for another reason.

She might be looking to scam a gullible man.

And who’s gullible?
Newbies.

And they fall for it.
Here’s why:
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The last sales page I wrote sold $600,000. But…

The first version sold $0.

This forced me to learn how to fix a sales page that doesn’t sell. So…

Here are the 8 ways you can use yourself.

>>> A Thread 🧵 <<<
Let me be honest with you.
If you don’t understand this…

Stop reading:

Click -> View -> ATC -> IC -> Pur

Why?
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Click -> View

Where a person clicks on your link to get to the sales page.

View -> ATC

From landing on your page to clicking the “Add to Cart” button

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From clicks the Add to Cart button to getting to the Initial Checkout page

IC -> Pur

Last step of the purchase.
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