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Jan 22, 2023 10 tweets 5 min read Read on X
Most academic writing is awful at concision.

It's always:

• Verbose verbiage
• Prolix prose
• Jumbled jargon

Horrible to read.

Here's how top academic writers tweak their text. ↓
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1. 'Irregardless' is a word, but don't use it.

The dictionary shows it's a word but also labels it as non-standard and incorrect in standard English.

Use either 'irrespective' or 'regardless.' This shows the dictionary definition of irregardless. Irrega
2. There is more than one way to write the possessive form of a word that ends in S.

Most academics are used to AP style, where the possessive of a word ending in S gets an apostrophe.

→ James' paper

But Chicago style recommends against that for clarity.

→ James's paper Two different styles of possessives ending in S from The Chi
3. The abbreviations 'i.e.' and 'e.g.' do not mean the same thing.

“e.g.” means "for example," and “i.e.” means "in other words" or "meaning."

“e.g.” → incomplete list of examples (no need to add 'etc.' at the end!)

“i.e.” → clarifying statement Example sentence: The interactive entertainment (i.e., games
4. Avoid run-on sentences.

Fusing together two complete sentences is not pretty.

It doesn't only happen in long sentences but can be as short as "I'm short he's a baller."

This happens when you don't use a semicolon, colon, or dash between two independent sentences. Run-on sentence example: I wish I was a little bit taller I
5. Passive voice is terrible, but it is not always incorrect.

Generally, avoid passive voice.

But:

Passive voice can be the best choice if you don't know who is responsible for an action.

"Mistakes were made." Example showing: "Mistakes were made" in front of
6. It's okay to split your infinitives.

Henry Alford, Dean of Canterbury, promoted the idea that you shouldn’t put an adverb in the middle of an infinitive
in his 1864 book:

The Queen’s English.

Not a rule, an idea.

For example: "To better understand" is common in academia. Star Trek reference image: An image of the starship Enterpri
7. You can end a sentence with a preposition.

Remove the preposition if the statement makes sense without it.

If the preposition is part of a phrasal verb or is necessary for a better style, keep it.

Example: "Let's kiss and make up." An example of a sentence ending with a preposition in front
TL;DR: Academic Writing

1. 'Irregardless' is a no-use word
2. S-ending possessives are stylistic.
3. 'i.e.' and 'e.g.' are not the same
4. Avoid run-on sentences
5. Passive voice is bad but not wrong
6. It's OK to split your infinitives
7. Prepositions can finish sentences.
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Here's the perfect formula to write a literature review paragraph.

A great literature review paragraph needs exactly 2 components.

Most students think every paper needs its own paragraph.

Completely off the mark.

The secret? Lit Review Paragraph example.
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• Group them under one theme
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Bad:
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Good:
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But critical thinking has 3 deeper layers: Overview of critical and analytical thinking from https://www.learningscientists.org/blog/2017/8/30-1
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A systematic review requires exhaustive, comprehensive searching with quality assessment criteria, while a rapid review can be completed with time-limited formal quality assessment. The difference is months of work.

According to this paper, 14 literature review types exist.

If you get started, focus on 2 main types:

Systematic reviews → exhaustive analysis
Rapid reviews → quick assessmentTable 1 from Grant, M. J., & Booth, A. (2009). A typology of reviews: An analysis of 14 review types and associated methodologies. Health Information & Libraries Journal, 26(2), 91–108. https://doi.org/10.1111/j.1471-1842.2009.00848.x
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• Tabular presentation
• Narrative synthesis
• Formal protocols

Rapid reviews:

• Limited quality checks
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• Flexible protocols

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Speed vs. thoroughness.
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→ You need thorough certainty
→ Time isn't the main factor
→ Quality is everything

Pick rapid when:

→ You need quick insights
→ Time drives decisions
→ Good enough works

Don't overcomplicate this.
Your timeline decides.

Source: Grant, M. J., & Booth, A. (2009). A typology of reviews: An analysis of 14 review types and associated methodologies. Health Information & Libraries Journal, 26(2), 91–108. DOI: 10.1111/j.1471-1842.2009.00848.x

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