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👋Welcome to the first #tweetorial in an 8 part series on "How to write a paper"

✍️This series is designed to help you improve your academic writing & includes top tips from established academics and journal editors.

✅We start this week with "How to write an Introduction"...
1/ ⚠️Start your Introduction with a gripping first sentence - spell out why your topic is important!

🗣️ According to @seyeabimbola, Editor of @GlobalHealthBMJ "Academic writing is persuasive writing".

➡️ Let's look at an example of a compelling opening statement 👇👇
2/ ✍️Our exemplar paper for this #tweetorial is called "Social media & vaccine hesitancy"

❗️Note how authors @slloydwilson & @CharlesShey start with an attention grabbing opening sentence, highlighting the importance of their work 👇

📕 Citation: gh.bmj.com/content/5/10/e… Image
3/🖼️ Once you've made a compelling opening statement, think about how you frame your work in relation to the "Big Picture". Think of it like you are telling a story.

❓ What do we already know about the topic?

👇Let's take a look at how @slloydwilson & @CharlesShey did this
4/ 👀In their paper they outline:

A. Why their work is important at this particular time (i.e. timeliness)
B. A brief overview of work already undertaken in this field (supported by relevant citations)
C. A statement outlining how they will address the gaps in the literature Image
5/ ➡️ Next, make sure you describe the specific issue you are addressing and the value you are adding.

❗️Highlight your specific research objectives and questions.

Lets look at how the authors from our exemplar paper did this...👇👇
6/ The authors clearly state they seek to answer 2⃣ research questions & frame these questions against the existing literature:
1. Does social media usage increase vaccine hesitancy in
populations?
2. Do foreign disinformation campaigns increase
vaccine hesitancy in populations? Image
7/⚠️ According to @seyeabimbola here are some common mistakes to try and avoid when writing your Introduction:

❌ Don't include *too much* information

✅Keep your Introduction relevant. Remember to explain key concepts, provide background information & discuss previous studies.
8/⚠️ Ensure your Introduction has a clear structure - say what you will cover, how, and why.
⚠️ Avoid bullet point lists. Instead, describe your study in prose.

✅A top tip is to read other published papers. Look at how the Introduction sections are structured.
⚠️NB: You don't have to start writing your paper with the Introduction. You might first decide to write the Methods section, then the Results, then the Discussion, and finally the Introduction & Conclusion.

👍There is no conventional method - do what works best for your piece.
➕ Here are some important resources which you may wish to read further when writing your Introduction:

🔗 This is a FANTASTIC checklist (Kudos @DrSherryPagoto): documentcloud.adobe.com/link/track?uri…

🔗 onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/epdf/10.10…

📕 THE must read book by @trishgreenhalgh ⤵️ Image
👍Thanks for reading - I hope this was helpful.

🕒 Next week we will cover "How to write your Methods section".

👋 I'll be crowd-sourcing ideas for this next week & would love to hear from you if you have any top-tips!

#phdchat #phdlife #PhD #AcademicTwitter #AcademicChatter
I wish to thank the following individuals who generously contributed their time, resources & advice this week: @seyeabimbola @mazwaite @FPfende @DrChrisPaton @HelenFry1 @ClaireJStandley @geniets @beswick_emily @muneera_rasheed @BlennerhassettA @JamesASmith92 @tobias_med /fin

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Mar 28, 2021
👋 Welcome back to ‘How to Write a Paper’ (pt 4)

✍️This week = ‘How to Write a DISCUSSION’

📜We’ll be using @SohamBGlobal et al.'s excellent @GlobalHealthBMJ paper “Infection and mortality of healthcare workers worldwide from #COVID19" as our exemplar study

🧵Let’s start ⏭️
1/ 𝐖𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐢𝐬 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐩𝐮𝐫𝐩𝐨𝐬𝐞 𝐨𝐟 𝐚 𝐃𝐢𝐬𝐜𝐮𝐬𝐬𝐢𝐨𝐧?

👉To interpret the results - which requires you to commit & be 𝗯𝗼𝗹𝗱
🔗To link your results to previous studies
☝️To make recommendations
📚To help the reader understand your study strengths & limitations
2/ 𝐖𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐭𝐨 𝐢𝐧𝐜𝐥𝐮𝐝𝐞?

✅Re-state the RQ & how your key findings address it
✅State how & why your findings align/differ from other studies
✅How do your findings contribute to the wider field
✅Strengths/limitations
✅Make recommendations & directions for future work
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Mar 13, 2021
👋Welcome back to the second #tweetorial in an 8 part series on "How to write a paper"

✍️This series is designed to help you improve your academic writing & includes top tips from established academics & journal editors.

THIS WEEK = "How to write a Methods Section"... 🧵👇👇
1/❓Why write a Methods Section at all?

🗣️I like @DrSicchia's articulation of why a Methods Section is important:

🧁Think of your Methods Section like a recipe...

"It should be clear so that readers can see & interrogate exactly what’s been done & how to replicate the study"
2/ The Methods Section is a description of how the study was carried out.

👇It should outline:

➡️Study design
➡️Study setting
➡️Participants
➡️What was done to answer the RQs
➡️How the findings were analysed
➡️Resources used
➡️Ethics

[+ more if relevant] Image
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