The 80/20 Of Reviewing Your Own Copy

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Here are 3 things you must ALWAYS include:
#1 — Big Idea/Hook

The Big Idea should address the BIG PROBLEM on your prospect's mind.

This is how you grab their ATTENTION...

And keep them reading.

It also connects your entire promotion.

@comedicbizman explains how to do this in 6FP

6figurepromotions.teachable.com/p/get-paid/?af…
#2 — Social Proof

Whenever you make a claim, you need to back it up.

Promises and Proof go hand in hand.

Otherwise, you lose credibility...

And that can kill the sale.

Social Proof Examples:

• Reviews
• Testimonials
• Case studies
• Endorsements
• Media mentions
#3 — A Strong Offer

Offer = Product + Bonuses + Terms + Guarantee

Your prospect should feel like your offer is the ONLY solution that will work for them...

And that INVESTING in your offer is faster/easier/safer than:

1. Trying to find their own solution

2. Doing nothing
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