I've written marketing copy for 6+ years.

Here are 10 copywriting formulas to increase conversions and clicks on your ads, emails, headlines, and landing pages.
Formula: Problem, Agitate, Solution.

P: identify main problem your audience has.

A: agitate with emotions & stressors.

S: offer your product as the solution.

Use for: landing pages

Example: @buymeacoffee
Formula: Be X Without Y

Be [solution] without [pain-point]

Focus on what your audience wants to become and how they can achieve it with no stress.

Use for: headlines

Example: @HypercontextApp
Formula: Anaphora

Anaphora is the repetition of a word or phrase at the beginning of each sentence, helping to solidify your message.

"Big skies. Big Scenery. Big Possibilities."

Use for: ads

Example: @WestJet
Formula: Attention, Interest, Desire, Action.

Get attention via a bold statement. Tease the solution to spark interest.

Build desire via wants and needs. Then show them how to take action.

Use for: body text

Example: @arvidkahl
Formula: Feature, Advantage, Benefit

Don't just list features. Highlight the advantages those features bring, and the end-result they achieve (benefit).

Use for: body text

Example: @Grammarly
Formula: Verb, Value, Urgency.

Verb → get
Value → graded
Urgency → today

Use for: CTAs

Example: @larrykim's @WordStream
Formula: Before, After, Bridge.

BAB is a storytelling formula that shows a user where they are now, where they can be in the future, and how your bridge (offer) gets them there.

Use for: email marketing

Example: @MorningBrew Newsletter
Formula: Outcome-With-Process

This formula focuses on concise clarity. Explain what will happen and how, pointing to your product as the solution.

Use for: headlines

Example:
@hipreetam93's @delightchathq
Formula: Bucket Brigades

Bucket brigades drive the person's attention to read line after line.

They're great for writing compelling long-form content.

Examples:

• Now:
• Truth is:
• Here's why:
• Think about it:
This last tip isn't a formula, but it's as useful. Here are three tools to improve your copywriting:

1. @copy_ai is magic for inspiration.

2. @Grammarly helps you refine tone, style, and more.

3. @HemingwayApp helps you write like you talk.
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9 Jun
I've created 100s of high-converting landing pages.

Here are 10 uniquely effective elements that will increase your conversion rates:
Tip: Pricing page social proof

Social proof shouldn't exist solely in a testimonial section. Add social proof on your pricing page to eliminate hesitation in critical decision stages.

Example: @PaulYacoubian + @chris__lu's @copyai
Tip: Bold phrases to focus attention

In your social proof, bold the results or transformation you were able to deliver to focus attention on concrete outcomes.

Example: @KateBour's @CustomerCampCo
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2 Jun
I've written 100s of landing page headlines in the last 4 years.

Here are 10 headline copywriting tips to increase conversions:
Tip: Sell the transformation

Great copy speaks to who the reader is now and who the reader can become by converting on your offer.

Example: @thisiskp_ + @beondeck
Tip: Call out objections

Don't give users a reason to second guess your offer. Speak to their most common objection directly in your headline and subheader.

Example: @hubspot's @TheHustle
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26 May
I've written and tested 100s of CTAs for landing pages.

Here are 10 call to action tips to increase your conversions:
Tip: V-V-U formula

Verb, value, urgency.

Verb → get
Value → graded
Urgency → today

Example: @WordStream
Tip: minimize risk and effort

Surround your CTA with risk-minimizing statements. No credit card needed. Unlimited access. 70+ tools.

Don't give users a reason to second guess.

Example: @PaulYacoubian / @chris__lu's @copy_ai
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19 May
I've done copywriting for 100s of landing pages and home pages.

Here are 10 landing page copywriting tips for more conversions:
Tip: weave features with benefits.

Features tell visitors what/how. Benefits tell them why. What root issue is your product solving? Write that as your headline.

Example: @KennethCassel's Slip.
Tip: questions drive action

Ask your visitors a compelling question that pushes attention to your CTA.

"Don't think you can make your pages look this good?" The reader can't help but click to find out more.

Example: @unbounce
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2 Apr
Lessons I’ve learned growing a $110,000+ / month company in the last 2 years.

On building a lean, profitable, bootstrapped business:
Be T-Shaped:

Great at many things, incredible at one.

Experts can charge more than generalists.

Then, your wide knowledge base will help you pivot, diversify, and upsell.
Systems mindset:

Systems are well oiled machines that produce an expected outcome.

Treat your business like one.

Distill your knowledge into standard operating procedures; checklists, tutorials, and videos that you can delegate.
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18 Feb
I've grown my SEO & Digital PR agency @userp_io to $110k MRR in 1.6 years.

Giving this build in public thing a shot...

Here is a thread covering a few key things that got uSERP where it is today 👇
1. PDS - Process, delegate, sell.

Document procedures from day 1.

Build processes that when handed off produce predicted outcomes consistently.

Then, delegate to a VA/hire people to run operations.

Now, your only job is bringing new clients + keeping current ones happy. Image
2. Avoid reliance

Most agencies / freelancers get sales from referrals.

Most don't scale fast.

If you want to scale, you need to SELL.

Cold outreach works. Even on Twitter (see image).

Always lead with value; a freebie of your service to get your foot in the door. Image
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