@nkjemisin builds infodumps into the book; there's a reason the character is pausing to tell you a story.
@joe_hill's The Fireman characters ponder different explanations for their world: "They don't know, so why does the reader need to know?"
*Make that three books, but she got her wish!
@joe_hill cites Clarke's Law ("sufficiently complex science is indistinguishable from magic" + vice versa) in "All I Care About is You": basically magic "but I figured 150 years in the future all this stuff will be possible via technology"
🌎 be choosy with language, avoid expository phrases like "as you know..."
🌍 what details are familiar/boring to characters vs readers?
🌏 tailor your POV character to the story
🗣 character dialogue, forward momentum
📚 @nkjemisin limits her research to 1-2 months
🛑 if the story starts slowing down, you're in trouble
@nkjemisin: "Mine come up with themselves. I don't have a choice."
@Marie_Lu + @marissa_meyer take notes on others' quirks.
@joe_hill: "Idk, but if you don't have a good one, you don't have a story."