A female character, who has been described as wearing "close-fitting" jeans, is given an envelope with $500 inside. She puts it into her front jeans pocket. Then she sits down comfortably.
I'm thinking she just wanted to take off the damn jeans.
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I DO care about the juices & the need to describe a 40-something as surprisingly hot. It's careless & demeaning & I see it way too much