Immediately after a meeting, write down every question that was asked - to the word. It feels tedious but it's the fastest way to improve your pitch.
Number your slides. Not even joking.
Prepare for questions more than you prepare your "pitch." You're not giving a TED talk.
Write a 1-2 page executive summary in Word/GDocs and send that instead of a deck. A good template is the "Prospectus Summary" in any S1. Dropbox S1 is a good template: see pp 1-5 sec.gov/Archives/edgar…
If there were no good questions, they aren't investing.
If an investor doesn't follow up within 48 hours, the chances of their investing decreased by 50%. With each additional day of non-response, those chances decay exponentially. Better to have peace of mind that someone has passed.
My argument: great writing doesn't happen in 30 minutes. It takes many drafts to make it concise and tight - much better process than making a pitch TED-like. And, some Bezos social proof: businessinsider.com/amazon-ceo-jef…
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