For a single sentence of non-binary representation, it is almost impressive how many different distinct issues I have with how it was handled.
A THREAD
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3. “Hermaphroditic” is ...bad, actually. It’s a slur, a medicalising term, and the passage makes a common cis error and conflates being intersex & being non-binary. They’re not the same damn thing.
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Being non-binary (and/or trans) isn’t defined by our bodies, our presentation, or our genitals. This is Gender 101 stuff.
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9. Assuming Jeremy means “gloriously genderfluid” above, I’ll observe that nothing in the PH passage actually says anything about Corellon’s gender (or identity) at all
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11. Which, again, being non-binary and being intersex aren’t the same thing.
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@Wizards_DnD needed non-binary sensitivity readers, because this passage reflects the ways that even well-meaning cis people medicalise our bodies and reduce us to aesthetics.
THREAD DONE
To everyone engaging supportively, you’re all lovely.
To everyone suggesting (well-meant I’m sure) that I volunteer to help fix it: pay your sensitivity readers
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