ME. "You're improving as a writer"
BK. "Thanks!"
ME. "Book one's pure infodump, but this is a fun opening with your hero attempting an elusive PR -- what's next?"
BK. *smiles, grasps infodump lever*
1) old-school weightlifter routines
2) old-school weightlifters breathlessly recounting the latest feats of other old-school weightlifters to their friends who are ALSO old-school weightlifters
3) old-school weightlifters saving people with Heroic Feats of Strength
and immediately give the crowd of onlookers a sales pitch for the equipment sold by the York Barbell Company
...this is what gun nut books are like for people who aren't gun nuts, isn't it