Thread by @RealNaijaGuy

Hello Mr CashMan,

My name is Upcoming, and I am a copywriter. I can write copies for you and help you make money.

Some of the services I offer are: website content, product description, email sequence, sales letters, brochures.

I always deliver with top notch quality.

I assure you of my utmost best if you consider working with me.

I look forward to your reply.

Thank you.

Upcoming money chaser.

Mr CashMan: 🚮

Upcoming tries for days upon days getting zero replies and having his cup of frustration full.

Soon enough something happens

Someone sees him and his hunger, and gives him a terrible knock on the head. The knock startles him.

This someone points him in the direction of books and courses: Robert Collier letter book, Boron letters, cashvertising, CopyMastery etc.

Upcoming's eyes open wide.

He begins to see a pattern. He observes there is a system. He realises he has been plain stupid and dull.

He now looks at his former self and wishes he could go back and give him a terrible knock.

With his confidence high 'eventuarry,' he now knows wah going on.

He goes back.

You are losing money, Mr CashMan!!

Hello Mr CashMan,

I just noticed a terrible error that shouldn't have been made that is making you lose money.

I looked through you website and observed...A, B, C, Problem and this is leading to XYZ consequence.

You can fix it up by applying L, J, K solution.

I have attached a material that can help guide in fixing the problem, just in case you experience any difficulty in it.

You might be wondering why I am doing this?

I am a trained web designer and Copywriter,

And I know how a little error like this can affect a company's revenue in the long run, which I believe you don't want.

If you would like me to show you a few more things you can do to absolutely multiply your revenue, you can reply me or call me with the number 080808080:):)

I'll be glad to show you what I have helped other people do to increase their revenue by 10 times.

Thank you.

Sincerely,

Finally here, and not upcoming!

PS: I'll check the site again tonight to see if the correction is made and get back to you.

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I wrote this to show you a few elements.

You want to help, or educate when you send such letters, and not sell.

You may even ignore the part of introducing yourself and just talk about the problem.