Another criticism is they might want to consider framing their research findings in a format that is relevant for entrepreneurs/startups/business people
it structured and reads like an academic paper
it structured and reads like an academic paper
And maybe focus more on this section (highlighted purple) aka biashara 
More biashara (trade/commerce/agricommerce) Thats how you grow the counties/country/economy (highlighted)
So if you look at chama groups as an economic unit in a biashara economy, your impact - social and economic - is measured and real
Biashara inclusion
Listen to this
Listen to this
My point is you could write all the academic papers in the world, but if you can't communicate it in a way that adds $$ value to an economy . . . well
