ἦμος δ᾽ ἠριγένεια φάνη ῥοδοδάκτυλος Ἠώς,
καὶ τότε πῦρ ἀνέκαιε καὶ ἤμελγε κλυτὰ μῆλα,
πάντα κατὰ μοῖραν, καὶ ὑπ᾽ ἔμβρυον ἧκεν ἑκάστῃ.
22 words in 3 lines. 48 syllables.
Which come, he first of all his fire enflames,
Then milks his goats and ewes, then to their dams
Lets in their young...
23 words, 24 syllables.
Now did the rosy-fingered morn arise,
And shed her sacred light along the skies;
He wakes, he lights the fire, he milks the dams,
And to the mother's teats submits the lambs.
4 lines, 33 words, 40 syllables.
lit up the world, the Kyklops built a fire
and milked his handsome ewes, all in due order,
putting the sucklings to the mother.
27 words, 31 syllables, almost 4 lines.
When young Dawn with her rose-red fingers shone once more
the monster relit his fire and milked his handsome ewes,
each in order, putting a suckling underneath each dam.
3 lines, 35 syllables, 30 words; Adds "the monster".
He rekindled the fire and milked his flocks,
all in good order, placing the sucklings
beneath their mothers.
Lombardo: 34 syllables, 3.5 lines, 27 words
Early the Dawn apppeared, pink fingers blooming,
and then he lit his fire and milked his ewes
in turn, and set a lamb by every one.
Slightly more words, same lines, fewer syllables.