That's one way a first line can set expectation-- as a genre clue. Some of those 6 strategies are more suited to some genres than others. #subtips
"Check this out. This dude named Andrew Dahl holds the world record for blowing up the most balloons . . . with his nose." —Ghost by Jason Reynolds
The bullfrog was only half dead, which was perfect.
—Gertie’s Leap to Greatness by Kate Beasley
Nobody believed me when I said two skunks stole my old trike. But I’d seen those stinkers take it.—The Midnight War of Mateo Martinez, Robin Yardi
There was a boy called Eustace Clarence Scrubb, and he almost deserved it —CSL, Dawn Treader
The best day of my life happened when I was five and almost died at Disney World. I’m sixteen now, so you can imagine that’s left me with quite a few days of major suckage.
– Going Bovine, by Libba Bray #subtips
Joost had two problems: the moon and his mustache.
Six of Crows—Leigh Bardugo #subtips
Lydia is dead. But they don't know this yet. —Everything I Never Told You by Celeste Ng
What? Who is they? Why don't they know? And why is she dead?
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Why would that be a pleasure? We have to know.
Quiet as it's kept, there were no marigolds in the fall of 1941. —The Bluest Eye by Toni Morrison
Why are people keeping marigolds quiet?!
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Happy families are all alike; every unhappy family is unhappy in its own way.-- Anna Karenina, Leo Tolstoy
The sun shone, having no alternative, on the nothing new. —Samuel Beckett, Murphy #subtips
Miss Brooke had that kind of beauty which seems to be thrown into relief by poor dress.
—George Eliot, Middlemarch #subtips
Six of Crows—Leigh Bardugo
Honestly, moons and facial hair pretty surprising problems.
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—Gertie’s Leap to Greatness by Kate Beasley
"perfect" is a huge surprise there. Why half dead, and not fully dead? Or fully alive? It's hilarious, but it's also surprising #subtips
Since it’s Sunday and it’s stopped raining, I think I’ll take a bouquet of roses to my grave.
—Gabriel Garcia Marquez, "Someone Has Been Disarranging These Roses"
He's taking roses to... his own grave? I'm surprised for sure
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It was a bright cold day in April, and the clocks were striking thirteen. —George Orwell, 1984.
Orwell is juxtaposing normality with oddity-- clock striking what now? (Note he's also using surprise!) #subtips
1st chapter: No child truly believes they will be hanged.
Red Sister—Mark Lawrence
Lawrence is juxtaposing dire information with a matter-of-fact voice, to great effect. #subtips
– Strange The Dreamer by Laini Taylor
Taylor uses dire info & matter-of-fact voice, but also specificity with details that are incredibly vague. It forces us to ask "what girl?! Why?" #subtips
You can also check out breakthroughwriters.com, where I teach things like this more often! #subtips