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This one does.
I’m going to give something of a review.
It’s well-written, but a bit long in my estimation—although there’s no need to read the foreword to an anthology of short stories, so read it or not, or as much of it or not as you like.
Namely, some of the weaker stories are front-loaded, so if you read the book from beginning to end (as I did), you’ll have to get 4 or 5 stories in before things pick up.
I give it an A-
I can’t give it better than a C+
It’s entertaining enough to get a B+
B+
Classic tale of “a barbarian amongst ‘civilized’ people.”
What would happen in a world where parents can manipulate their children to be exactly as they want them?
It’s pretty good, but suffers from contrast to the next story, A. M. Freeman’s “At the Edge of Detachment,” which is thematically very similar, but much more disturbing.
An A to Freeman’s story.
It’s not short story, so you can skip it.
No rating.
“Hymns of the Mothers” by Brad R. Torgersen is excellent, clearly an A. This is just damn good writing.
This is an A+
This story would make the anthology worth the price and the read JUST BY ITSELF.
His epic take down of The Last Jedi was, well, epic.
I’m almost glad The Last Jedi exists, just because I got to read him take it apart so brutally and humorously: scifiwright.com/category/revie…
And damn, was I impressed.
There are many parallel worlds with alternate histories, and some have discovered a way to travel between these worlds by possessing the bodies of their counterparts in those other worlds.
So of course Social Justice World appoints itself the task of “fixing” all the other parallel worlds, which are not “Socially Just.”
They won’t leave anyone alone.
The Twitter responses are HILARIOUS. 99% of them amount to “STFU, George, and FINISH THE GODDAMN BOOK!”
And this was 2016! 😂
We next get the moving “World Ablaze” by Jane Lebak. It’s an A. I found it powerful and affecting. It deals with being a Christian in a time in which it is illegal to be so, a time the West will reach if it doesn’t correct.
It is the sort of story you should expect Vox Day to write for an anthology called Forbidden Thoughts.
It’s well written and pulls off the twist at the end very effectively.
If you’re like me, you’ll fall over laughing at the end.
A
The more I think about this story, the more I’m inclined to give it an A+ also.
And I am thinking more about it, because I find it a story that is sticking with me.
I do not think it will disappoint you.
Editorially, I would have arranged things differently (led with Young’s, put Wright’s in the center, and ended with Lamplighter’s) but it is what it is.