Here are some ideas to improve it. 1/10
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2) "I haven't heard of any of these companies — can this startup recruit?"
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Consider adding 1-2 lines about each person, explaining their accomplishments — e.g.
💰 Liz landed 10 $1M+ accounts at Stripe last year
🎨 Bill was the first designer hired at Slack
👩💻 Jen built Airbnb's most popular open source repository
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