I found this book after seeing that David Ogilvy called it “without a doubt, the most useful book on advertising [he] had ever read.”
Good enough for me!
Here are my key takeaways:
First, there is a GIGANTIC difference btwn a good ad & a bad ad
Caples says “I have seen one ad sell 19 1/2x as much goods an another.”
Second, a good ad is discovered by applying the scientific method to the testing of ad variables
Both authors start w an observation that there are widely divergent outcomes in their respective fields and set out to identify the factors that lead to success.
For example, one mailer would direct readers to mail responses to Acme department R-44 while a different ad would direct ppl to de R-45
“If my ad department had a year to prepare a campaign for my product, I would be satisfied if they spent 11 month in search of the right appeal, and one month- or one week- preparing the actual ads”
Caples
In fact, of the 18 chapters in the book a full 4 are dedicated to the craft of how to write headlines
“If the headline doesnt stop people, the copy might as well be written in Greek”
- Caples
Three things (in order)
1. Self Interest: appealing to what the readers want
2. News: “Discovered - a new kind of hand cleaner”
3. Curiosity: “Are you playing fair w/ your wife?”
And you thought clickbait was new...
“Your prospective customers may be in a hurry. They may be half asleep.
You have got to hit them where they live - in the heart or in the head.
You have got to catch their eyes or ears with something simple, something direct, something they want to hear”
Caples
- Headlines That Attract the Most Readers
- Right and Wrong Methods of Writing Headlines
- 35 Proven Formulas for Writing Headlines
“Just as a physician uses the same prescription many times with beneficial effect, so can the advertising copy writer use formulas that have worked successfully in the past”
Caples
The secret? Write with enthusiasm!
“Everybody knows that you can tame a wild horse and make the animal useful. But it is impossible to put life into a dead horse.”
-John Caples
1. Use present grande, second person
2. Use subheads
3. Out captions under illustrations
4. Use a simple style of writing
5. Choose simple words
6. Give free information
7. Use selling copy vs style copy
9. Make your copy specific
10. Use long copy
11. Write more copy than is necessary to fill the space
12. Avoid helping competitors
13. Use mail order methods in direct mail ads
14. Understand overstatement copy bs understatement
15. Avoid trick slogans
17. Do not say that salesmen will call
18. Study the selling copy in mail order catalogs
19. Make every advertisement a complete sales talk
The books encylodpedic nature makes it a little hard to blurb, but highly recommended for students of writing and advertising!